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| Don |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 8:52pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator  So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts13495 Posts Per Day 1.95 |
Memories by Crazy Horse - Short, Drama - Sometimes dramas are buried deeper than we think. - pdf, format  |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:29pm |
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| The boy who could fly |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:32pm |
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LocationBritish Columbia, Canada Posts1444 Posts Per Day 0.28 |
Well not sure what to say other than I liked this one, fit the challenge I guess, I kinda felt bad for some of the animals....but oh well. Good job  |
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| Zombie Sean |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:36pm |
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LocationAnywhere there's a zombie... Posts1466 Posts Per Day 0.28 |
Same with Jordan here, I'm not sure whether I like it or not. It was a strange on indeed, and I do feel bad for dem animals der, but...I guess...
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| Tommyp |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:50pm |
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Regular  Continuity Is For Pussies...
LocationAustralia Posts775 Posts Per Day 0.19 |
Yeah don't read this one around the kids. Well, don't let them read it.
I would have liked to see a bit more of a build up for this one... it was pretty good though... |
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| Higgonaitor |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:05am |
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Location(40.717261, -73.600087) Posts1167 Posts Per Day 0.21 |
Yeah, i laughed. I think thats all you were going for. |
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| Andrew |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:08am |
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LocationSoon to be Sydney, Australia! Posts1714 Posts Per Day 0.43 |
This was certainly an interesting little number!
It did make me chuckle, but drama!?
Entertaining read, however.
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| mcornetto |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:10am |
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This was cute. I'm not sure it was really a drama, it seemed more like a skit, but it was amusing. |
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| MBCgirl |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:26am |
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Been around a while  Some things are better left to the imagination!
LocationScottsdale Posts393 Posts Per Day 0.09 |
Hate to disagree guys...and it's not about the "fucking of animals" that I have a problem with...Uncle Eddie certainly lives in a different world...OBVIOUSLY.
The only positive thing I can say, is the twist at the end...albeit unwritten, was he got it in the end. *tee hee
Poor spelling, general mistakes throughout and it was short. You know me...I think anything we put up should be our best effort - at least in written form.
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I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.
When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.
MBCgirl =)
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| Dreamscale |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:08am |
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LocationCave Creek, AZ Posts11185 Posts Per Day 2.52 |
Another piece of shit entry! C'mon people...WTF? Funny? OK, maybe at first, but it's a 1 line joke...3 frickin' pages...3 poorly written pages at that. No drama, whatsoever. no secret that I saw. Just rubbish...pure rubbish. Embarrassing, actually.
Hoping for alot more in the 2nd round.
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| dresseme |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:13am |
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Another piece of shit entry!
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I'm pretty sure, regardless of how bad the entry is, this is not appropriate. |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:14am |
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LocationChicago Posts3611 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
Quoted from dresseme
I'm pretty sure, regardless of how bad the entry is, this is not appropriate.
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You are correct, sir. But I'm going to let it stay. |
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| Sham |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:18am |
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LocationGeorgia Posts367 Posts Per Day 0.07 |
Another piece of shit entry! C'mon people...WTF? Funny? OK, maybe at first, but it's a 1 line joke...3 frickin' pages...3 poorly written pages at that. No drama, whatsoever. no secret that I saw. Just rubbish...pure rubbish. Embarrassing, actually.
Hoping for alot more in the 2nd round.
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I didn't hate it nearly as much as you did, Dreamscale, but I didn't like it, either, at least not for this competition. It's an okay short on its on, but it's the wrong genre. I'll probably get a lot of "screwing farm animals is dramatic!" retorts, but that's not what comes to my mind when I think of drama. |
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| JamminGirl |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:23am |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:24am |
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LocationChicago Posts3611 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
First post. The bolded part. Click on it. |
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