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Posted: April 10th, 2009, 10:52pm Report to Moderator
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Memories by Crazy Horse - Short, Drama - Sometimes dramas are buried deeper than we think. - pdf, format


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This one's a winner.


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Well not sure what to say other than I liked this one, fit the challenge I guess, I kinda felt bad for some of the animals....but oh well.  Good job


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Same with Jordan here, I'm not sure whether I like it or not. It was a strange on indeed, and I do feel bad for dem animals der, but...I guess...


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Yeah don't read this one around the kids. Well, don't let them read it.

I would have liked to see a bit more of a build up for this one... it was pretty good though...


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Yeah, i laughed.  I think thats all you were going for.


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This was certainly an interesting little number!

It did make me chuckle, but drama!?

Entertaining read, however.

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This was cute.  I'm not sure it was really a drama, it seemed more like a skit, but it was amusing.
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Hate to disagree guys...and it's not about the "fucking of animals" that I have a problem with...Uncle Eddie certainly lives in a different world...OBVIOUSLY.  

The only positive thing I can say, is the twist at the end...albeit unwritten, was he got it in the end. *tee hee

Poor spelling, general mistakes throughout and it was short.  You know me...I think anything we put up should be our best effort - at least in written form.

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Another piece of shit entry!  C'mon people...WTF?  Funny?  OK, maybe at first, but it's a 1 line joke...3 frickin' pages...3 poorly written pages at that.  No drama, whatsoever. no secret that I saw.  Just rubbish...pure rubbish.  Embarrassing, actually.

Hoping for alot more in the 2nd round.



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Another piece of shit entry!




I'm pretty sure, regardless of how bad the entry is, this is not appropriate.
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I'm pretty sure, regardless of how bad the entry is, this is not appropriate.


You are correct, sir.  But I'm going to let it stay.


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Quoted from Dreamscale
Another piece of shit entry!  C'mon people...WTF?  Funny?  OK, maybe at first, but it's a 1 line joke...3 frickin' pages...3 poorly written pages at that.  No drama, whatsoever. no secret that I saw.  Just rubbish...pure rubbish.  Embarrassing, actually.

Hoping for alot more in the 2nd round.


I didn't hate it nearly as much as you did, Dreamscale, but I didn't like it, either, at least not for this competition. It's an okay short on its on, but it's the wrong genre. I'll probably get a lot of "screwing farm animals is dramatic!" retorts, but that's not what comes to my mind when I think of drama.


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Where is it posted?


Family Picnic 10 pages.

After the Trade 3 pages

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Where is it posted?


First post.  The bolded part.  Click on it.


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