Quoted from Reef Dreamer I'm aiming to submit the script that Ray hates most and thinks is the least likely to be produced. Oh yes, bring it on...mind you with these criteria I could have some challengers.

LOL!

Yeah... well...

I haven't the slightest idea where Scoob got the notion about me producing anything with this go round, or even reviewing them "as a producer might." That was last year's October OWC.
I had some material changes in my life that have kicked down the road the April OWC production I wanted to take from script to screen.

For this one I'm reading just for strict entertainment value.
- No budget considerations.
- No production considerations.
- Light spec screenplay format observations.
- Key story element construct.

Not even really considering if it pass/fail meets the given criteria.
Literature in screenplay format = All good!




I'm still stewing over my own story construct.
My Friday's booked, so early Thursday is make-it-or-break-it for me.
Won't start getting edgy until late Wednesday.

GL with your story, tho!

I’m totally diggin’ the OWC theme this time around, and its right on par with something I was brewing for this season; however, the whole dialogue restricted to just one character thing… man that really throws a monkey wrench into the engine. It took me two ½ days of banging my head to even come up with a concept that could/should work…

It’s starting to take shape now (in my head, lol), and when all is said and done, I can easily see myself  creating unnecessary dialogue,  just so I can slice and dice it to bits in order to bring the proper page count…

Read: neurotic

Anyways, best of luck I say. I’m curious to see what repressed evil is lurking about this board …

I'm done with my 1st draft too. It's a pretty weird story. There's weird action and weird people in it. Weird wording, weird dialog.
Even the formatting is weird.

And there's no sex in it.
I need to get some sex in. It might save it.

Quoted from khamanna I need to get some sex in.

Oh my...

Some pretty weird sex.



Ghost humping.


What's the sound of two vapors slapping?

There will be no sex or foul language in mine because I find that sort of thing offensive.

See...two guys responded to your sex comment Khamanna.

I finally landed on an idea I liked. Glad you got one going Bill!!  

Quoted from Grandma Bear There will be no sex or foul language in mine because I find that sort of thing offensive.

And as evidence of the above, your honor, I will submit this shower scene from her movie "Dead Ringer."



Gary

Quoted from Gary in Houston And as evidence of the above, your honor, I will submit this shower scene from her movie "Dead Ringer."

You're a bully and want nothing else than people to hate me!!!!!  

Quoted from Grandma Bear You're a bully and want nothing else than people to hate me!!!!!

Pia, the last thing anyone could ever do is hate someone as talented and successful as you... but I do dare anyone to watch that scene without feeling equally aroused and horrified!  

Quoted from Gary in Houston And as evidence of the above, your honor, I will submit this shower scene from her movie "Dead Ringer." Gary

Submit it then! I'd love to see it - the clip, I mean.

First draft complete

I feel good!

Yeah I'll take a stab at the contest. I hope I kill.

Quoted from Gary in Houston I do dare anyone to watch that scene without feeling equally aroused and horrified!

Now that's a compliment!!!!!!  

Quoted from LC Submit it then! I'd love to see it - the clip, I mean.

It will be on Showtime in the near future.  

Pia is going to roll her eyes at this...but I have a question. Is texting, computer chat room talk, Facebook messaging considered dialog? Typed by a second character, not spoken out loud.  Sorry Pia. LOL