Odd, I found his basement quite entertaining, not depressing. I'm surprised how many of these entries focus on diplomas and certificates. Just an observation....

Okay, then. I think I found my favorite. Twisted and funny with a sprinkle of horror. Decent character development and dialog. Meets the challenge as well. Good work, writer.

This is a very well-written and entertaining effort. The only reason I hadn't read this one yet was due to the title being too similar to another horror comedy out there.

The bobblehead doll plays no real part in the story. So you should lose a mark (or even two) on criteria. Story should also lose a mark due to being too convenient. The transition from kiling animals to the doctor is all too sudden. Is that the fault of the page limit? Maybe not. More likely, a fault of the time constraint.

If I was scoring, I'd also take a mark away for the unoriginal title.

Maybe I'd add a mark back though for the entertainment.

Still, this should score highly... if not win this round.