I think this story needs more space to fill in some blanks. There was some very interesting stuff going on. Gabe was definitely an intriguing character but in the end I was confused by him. He has some kind of powers? And what dirty work was he doing for Bergman? She calls him a poser at the end...I didn't understand that at all. And the diamond? Brian sold it and gave to the hospital instead of saving his daughter? The diamond wasn't his....but he didn't steal it? Again...intriguing stuff but definitely needs more space to fill holes. I wanted more so that's good!!

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