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AnthonyCawood
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What Mark said!

And Libby that's fascinating, never knew that we were using it wrong all along! Tx for sharing


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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
As for this weeks topic, I see it as loyalty. Week 1 was greed, this is more about some element binding people together. Family is the most obvious choice because of blood, but I think you can be flexible, like the brothers-in-arms example or a family of vampires. I'm certainly going to be flexible in my scoring as long as I can see the element in there.


By blood, they mean what you perceive to be your family, not your literal family (although it can mean that). Military, athletes, cops, anything like that, or you could do a straight family piece.

Whomever your character considers to be their blood, they're closer to that person or people than they are to anyone else.


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Quoted from LC
Ah, but hang on...

There's another meaning contrary to the classic belief:

“Blood is thicker than water.”
The quote comes from: “The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb.” This actually means that blood shed in battle bonds soldiers more strongly than simple genetics. Although we commonly use it to suggest the strength of family ties, it doesn't refer to family at all

From a site called 35 quotations we've been getting wrong.
https://thoughtcatalog.com/nico-lang/2013/09/31-famous-quotations-youve-been-getting-wrong/

I still think modern usage refers to family coming first though.
Already a conundrum... or an extra choice, if you see it that way.


Yes, Like Mougli was fighting for his wolf pack!
In Russian movie they'd say "You and I of the same blood" and it was like a theme of that movie.
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Writing this week's bit is crusin right on. But I'm going through this tug of war between titles.
I finally decided on one, due to a surprise revelation in the script. It's too ripe.


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I have half of an idea. Gonna write it today in the hope that it inspires the second half!


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Ever looked at a script and thought...what is the point of that!!



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AnthonyCawood
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All to frequently Bill ;-(


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I got to page three and realised I'm not gonna make it, Captain!  Time for an emergency rethink and restructure!

I need coffee and chocolate,  stat!


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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
I got to page three and realised I'm not gonna make it, Captain!  Time for an emergency rethink and restructure!

I need coffee and chocolate,  stat!


I’m on page four. Now to fit a couple hours’ worth of story on that last page


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"Love is (love is!) higher then a mountain,
Love is thicker than water,
You are (you are!) this dreamers only dream,
Heaven's angel,
Devil's daughter..."

Thanks Blondie, I've had this song in my head for 4 days now...

AJR


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Quoted from ajr
Thanks Blondie, I've had this song in my head for 4 days now...


Weren't my fault... =)


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ajr
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That shit is STILL in my head, Blondie, even as I write to satisfy your evil urges.

I even tried scrubbing it with Zeppelin. No luck.

I think it's grounds for a lawsuit.

AJR


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Quoted from ajr
That shit is STILL in my head, Blondie, even as I write to satisfy your evil urges.

I even tried scrubbing it with Zeppelin. No luck.

I think it's grounds for a lawsuit.

AJR


It’s the Aussie factor bro. We get into your head like...like pigeons on a face!!!

Bee Gees were born in England but Oz claims them as Aussies.  Well they did until Saturday Night Fever lol  



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Quoted from FrankM
I’m on page four. Now to fit a couple hours’ worth of story on that last page


I have managed to push a slightly polished turd across the finish line. I know I'll deserve all the derision aimed at it.

Sorry for missing the first week.


Feature-length scripts:
Who Wants to Be a Princess? (Family)
Glass House (Horror anthology)

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AnthonyCawood
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Do we submit Week 2 travesties on same link as week 1?


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