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Nicely done Z! I love seeing scripts turn into films because I like to see what stayed and what went and how it was put onto film. The camera work was really good and the lighting really set the mood of dread...or something like that.
It's well done. I enjoyed the shadow. I remember reading this script. The roach moving is a nice touch.
Gabe
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This is the first film I've seen based on someone's script here at SS and I have to say it was great. Having read the script, I think it was done well. The jittery cinematography and washed-out color scheme I thought fit the story nicely and really established a solid noir-ish/drugged out feel. I liked it a lot as I did the script itself.
I think this is the first script I've read here at SS that I've seen get produced.
The production values were top-notch. One thing though - I'd prefer if they used filtered crowd noise in the background as opposed to music. The ring of the bell too could be jarring if they timed it with a few quick cuts of him sparring with his opponent. That's how I pictured it in my mind anyway as I read your script. Still very well done.
"If at first, the idea is not absurd, then there is no hope for it." - Albert Einstein
Congrats on the production. I think they did a good job visually on it. The sound had an echo to it, but it's pretty hard thing to get around in a locker room.
Well done on this, I had a read of the script first and found it interesting, seeing the film was weird. Very well done, you should be very proud of this. It is a great little short and think they did an excellent job on it. The chick was hot and after reading the script I imagine the actor was probably dissapointed that they decided not to go with the french kissing scene! The last scene in the ring was good and a fine way to finish. Nice one. You give us all hope!