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Ryan1
Posted: May 29th, 2010, 4:28am Report to Moderator
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INT. CONVENIENCE STORE - NIGHT

Walter begins to backpedal.  He lowers his toy gun, shakes his head.

WALTER
It’s not real, it’s just...

COP
I said freeze!

Walter staggers backward toward a door.  He opens it, quickly shuts it behind him.

INT. STOCKROOM - NIGHT

Walter runs through the stockroom, throws open another door.

EXT. ALLEY - NIGHT

Walter finds himself in a grungy alley behind the store.  A seven foot brick wall stands in front of him.  He runs to a garbage can, jumps on it, then scales the wall.

EXT. BACKYARD - NIGHT

Walter runs through a backyard.  He hears sirens converging around him.

EXT. STREET - NIGHT

Walter runs across a street.  He sees blue and red lights reflected off nearby houses.  Tires squeal about a block away.

INT. BACKYARD - NIGHT

Walter enters another backyard.  Nearby, he hears cops running on foot.

Sweating, gasping, desperate, Walter sees the back door to the house next to him is slightly ajar.  He runs inside.

INT. HOUSE - NIGHT

Walter shuts the door behind him.  He huddles in a cramped, dark room.  He hears policemen call to each other outside.

An adjacent door opens, light floods the room.  A short, squat MAN, fully cloaked in a black robe, fills the doorway.

MAN
Are you the candidate?
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Ryan1
Posted: May 29th, 2010, 4:30am Report to Moderator
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Mr. Blonde, you're up.
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mcornetto
Posted: May 29th, 2010, 6:10am Report to Moderator
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That was actually pretty good for not understanding what was going on.

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rendevous
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I went camping once. With two other fellas. It got sticky and sore and very unseemly. I shan't be going again. I like toilets and sinks with carpet. That never get damp. And drains. Ah, I knew had to do something. Now, did I leave my trowel near my keys? And where the hell is the shovel gone?


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JonnyBoy
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I'm in the game, if anyone wants to tag me.


Guess who's back? Back again?
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Andrew
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Same. Tag when ready, but am filming tomorrow, so best to leave until tomorrow evening. Some good stuff here.

Andrew


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Got some time today, too. I'm open.


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Quoted from JonnyBoy
I'm in the game, if anyone wants to tag me.


This excercise might be better if we just let someone "call dibbs" on writing the next page (first come, first serve).  That way we avoid favoritism.  

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mcornetto
Posted: May 29th, 2010, 10:19am Report to Moderator
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Go for it. If you feel that strongly about it run it that way.
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Mr. Blonde
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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I know I was recently tagged. I don't have a lot of time until tonight, so someone else please take my turn for now. I'll come back in later on.


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I'll go, if'n there ain't no objections.

Walter gasps as the man removes his hood. His entire face and bald head are covered with tattoos.

WALTER
Yes...Yes I am.

MAN
By what name are you known, candidate?

Walter pauses. The man’s eye socket makes up the thorax of a vicious looking spider that adorns the left side of his face.

WALTER
Peter. Peter Parker.

The man looks Walter over. He’s pale, sweaty and decidedly non-inked.

MAN
Very well, Mr. Parker. Nothing pleases her more than a blank canvas on which to paint. Come. We’ll see if she approves.

Walter frowns as the man leads him into another room.

INT. THE OFFICE.

The man leads Walter into what appears to be an abandoned dentists office. The chair, sharp instruments and overhead light
are rusted and filthy.

The wrist restraints appear new.

In addition to rusty tools, the counters are covered with small, brightly colored vials that are stacked as high as possible, looking like
the smallest bump would send them all to the floor.

The man motions for Walter to sit in the chair.

Walter brushes off a few cockroaches and takes a seat.

The man's face contorts in a sneer.

MAN
She will be with you shortly, candidate. In the meantime,
I strongly suggest that you remove your pants.


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Okay, I see Ryan's tagged me but it's nearly half one here in the UK, I've been drinking and I've gotta go to bed...

Mr. Blonde, I see you're online - you're up. I'll go in the morning, I promise.

Night y'all.




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Mr. Blonde
Posted: May 29th, 2010, 7:38pm Report to Moderator
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I keep making this damn thing too long. Once again, it came to about a page and a half. Lol. One of these times, I'm going to get it right.

_________________________________________________________________________________

The man walks out of the room.

WALTER
I’m outta here.

Walter sees a door behind the chair. He slowly opens it.

BACK ROOM - CONTINUOUS

A petite Asian woman, DR. LIAN (42), sits at a desk. A desk lamp provides the only light in the room.

DR. LIAN
(Smiles)
‘Evening. Are you our candidate?

WALTER
Me? No. I was just... leaving.

DR. LIAN
No, I don’t think you were. In fact, I think you’re ready now.

Dr. Lian reaches in the desk, pulls out a tranquilizer gun. She hits Walter in the neck with it, he falls.

OFFICE - LATER

Walter’s eyes slowly flutter open. He looks around, sees he’s strapped to the chair with Dr. Lian and the man over him.

Dr. Lian holds a pair of pliers. She leans in.

Walter struggles to get free of the chains. He can’t.

DR. LIAN
So, now... Where to begin?

WALTER
Who the fuck?! Who the fuck are you?! What are you doing to me?

Dr. Lian looks back at the man.

DR. LIAN
Jerry... you didn’t tell him?
(To Walter)
I’m a dentist. And, I see you’re a prime candidate.

Dr. Lian tightens the pliers on one of Walter’s incisers.

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Tagging Andrew Allen.



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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: May 29th, 2010, 10:05pm Report to Moderator
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Wow, you guys had me fooled. I thought Walter was completely insane. And then I thought he was going to get some kind of extraordinary tattoo.  

I don't know what they're gonna do or why, but maybe he should pulls some mental gymnastics and go back to that store to pick up the goodies for his wife and be a "Nice Walter".  

Sandra



A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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Mr. Blonde
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Quoted from Sandra Elstree.

Wow, you guys had me fooled. I thought Walter was completely insane. And then I thought he was going to get some kind of extraordinary tattoo.  

I don't know what they're gonna do or why, but maybe he should pulls some mental gymnastics and go back to that store to pick up the goodies for his wife and be a "Nice Walter".  

Sandra


For my part, I was planning a tattoo, but I couldn't get the right tone for it. So, I went with a "wrong place, wrong time"-type thing.


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