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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Screenwriting Discussion    Simplyscripts Collaborative Effort  ›  Showdown #4 Ryan vs ?? - NAMING Moderators: Mr. Blonde
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 Vote for A, B or C?
A (10 votes)
83.33%
B (1 votes)
8.33%
C (1 votes)
8.33%
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mcornetto
Posted: March 30th, 2011, 3:51am Report to Moderator
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Okies.... I think you can guess now if you want.
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I went with A.  It was written okay and had a pretty good twist.  But most of all, I followed the whole story.

B was ehh.  Don't really understand how the president taking a bullet would make everybody all of a sudden put their mask on.  Maybe I missed something.  (I do find it interesting how both A and B went with a widespread virus panic though, considering the logline just mentioned an isolated rape.)

C was hard to read and didn't really make sense.  I mean, I understood what happened, but it still didn't make sense, logically.


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Electric Dreamer
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A - Clear narrative, inventive environment & twist on the logline for bonus points.

B - Solid opener, tacked on rape correlation & ineffectual end. Not bad effort.

C - Too many characters, muddled motivators & solid formatting. Didn't get it.

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khamanna
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I think
A is Ryan
B - can't say
C - maybe Hugh Hoyland (mere observation, because of the God.. tattoo)
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Dreamscale
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My guess is that A is the winner...
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I think Ryan is B.  


Be excellent to each other
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Dreamscale
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I think Sandra wrote all 3 of them!
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Quoted from Dreamscale
I think Sandra wrote all 3 of them!


Quit jokin' around Jeffster  

I do like to study different kinds of writing though, even if the brand isn't my cup of tea.

Did I ever tell you my mushroom story? No? Ah well... later. Remind me.

Who did A?

Sandra



A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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Dreamscale
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Ahhhh...Mushrooms...my fave!!!!!
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leitskev
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Writing and mushrooms. Hmmm.
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mcornetto
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Well, we already know that A will continue on.   Would you like me to name names now?
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mcornetto
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I can only take the silence as a yes.  

Ryan wrote script A.  Once again he continues on...  Who will challenge this heavyweight writer next?  Let me know by PM.  

In the meantime I won't let you know who the mystery writers are.  However, if they want to they can take ownership.  
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Ryan1
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Something about that logline made me think sci-fi.  I was surprised to see the writer of B had the same general concept I did of some future plague.  Opening scene ran on further than I wanted, and I would have liked to flesh out the whole plague history more, but I was pretty pleased with how this one turned out.  For a two-dayer.

Gotta know who wrote those two others, though.  Time to name names, Mike.

I'm guessing one of them was Leitskev.
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leitskev
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Nope. I wouldn't review my own work, or vote, as I did.

I offered to play though. Offered again Ryan. Not up to me.

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mcornetto
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One of the authors requested that I not name them - I'm not sure if the other cares or not but I figured I'd give them the same option.  They can name themselves if they want.  

The next challenge is going to be Ryan vs Kevin.    I'd like to give the showdowns a short rest though so we'll start next Wednesday.  That ok with both of you?
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