A few things to start off:
--"His name is Darryl WALKER and he is not a happy camper." -- You have already introduced Darryl Walker. No need to do it again.
--"He turns on the radio expecting music." -- How do you know he's expecting music? You want to show, not tell.
-- You should never have your character say something and then say something again on a different line. Ex:
DARRYL Hello?
DARRYL No...Honey... I can't believe it. Hon... So what?
DARRYL
DARRYL (weakly) Oh yeah for how much?
DARRYL Forget it I'll write the check.
DARRYL For what?
DARRYL I gotta go. Can I call you later?
-- Double spacing doesn't indicate a pause where the other person talks on the other end of the phone. This should be:
Hello?...No...Honey... I can't believe it. Hon...So what?...Oh yeah for how much?...Forget it, I'll write the check...For what?...I gotta go. Can I call you later?
--3 periods does the trick.
--So far, diolauge is good. Just Give this a quick touch up.
Good luck,
-Emanuel
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