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khamanna
Posted: March 6th, 2011, 1:03am Report to Moderator
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Thanks Ray. All the interest? Hmmm - I must have missed all that interest...
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Quoted from khamanna
The Over Credits part provides no insight...



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Over Credits stays!!!


So which is it, lady?

Drop me a note when Don posts up your rewrite and I will look also.


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khamanna
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By "the over credits part provides no insight" - I mean it's not there to clarify things - the fact that Nadine is crazy should be pretty obvious (although I see that it's not, don't know why though, "Christina crumble away, into nothingness" - I thought that says it al).

I just find them very cool! I know how annoying the Over Credits might be though People use Over Black by the way which really is Over Credits - I am not that clever...

I'll ask you to read it when I submit the rewrite, thanks. But I want it to stay the same subtle. I was very careful to keep you guessing till the end.
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Khamanna - Over credits is a directors choice. Directors hate it when we try to direct from the script. At least you didn't put in camera directions.


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You already said it
Like I said - if it was Over Black, then it wouldn't look like directing. A Director is free no to include it, it doesn't add any insight anyway. It just sounds too cool...
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Good thought provoking piece you have here. I quite enjoyed it. I don't completely get it, but that doesn't matter.

Its a very talky script and i can guess some would have a problem with that. I interpreted it as Christina was raped by Chris. Thats why she had to come back and tell her mother. It wasn't an accident. He killed her to cover up what he'd been doing to her.

Anyways, I enjoyed it and see you've got people thinking. Good job for an OWC and thanks for reading mine.

James


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Thanks for reading it James. I frankly don't know how to rewrite - the only thing I'll change Over Credits to something else or get rid of it completely. But I don't know if I should make clear the backstory and perhaps if I knew I should make it clearer I wouldn't know how

Your review sways me toward not clearing that part up otherwise I was more on the other side

Thanks
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