Hey Brian, thanks for the read and congrats on Captive!  One of the creepiest of the bunch, no doubt.  

Quoted from shootingduck While I like the visual of the old man in the oven, I'm not sure it makes sense story-wise.

You're absolutely right.  When you've got a week to write something, sometimes you just don't even think about those nitty gritties.

Thanks again!

Greg

I liked this script, though I think it deserves a rewrite.  The OWC rushed it.

My only problem with it is that the sidhe spoke with a modern day voice.  This kept taking me out of the illusion that Mickey was talking with a supernatural entity.  Maybe this was your way of saying that she didn't exist and it was all in Mickey's head.  I don't know, but it didn't work for me.

Again, rewrite it.  Add to it.  It's a good story.


Phil

Hi Phil,

Thanks for the read and your input!  I'm glad you liked it.  Good idea - a future rewrite will consider that.

Thanks again.

Greg