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...And I Take You - Feb 2011 OWC (currently 5014 views)
Posted: March 10th, 2011, 11:45pm
San Diego, California
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Hey Brian, thanks for the read and congrats on Captive! One of the creepiest of the bunch, no doubt.
While I like the visual of the old man in the oven, I'm not sure it makes sense story-wise.
You're absolutely right. When you've got a week to write something, sometimes you just don't even think about those nitty gritties.
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Posted: March 17th, 2011, 7:23am
I liked this script, though I think it deserves a rewrite. The OWC rushed it.
My only problem with it is that the sidhe spoke with a modern day voice. This kept taking me out of the illusion that Mickey was talking with a supernatural entity. Maybe this was your way of saying that she didn't exist and it was all in Mickey's head. I don't know, but it didn't work for me. Again, rewrite it. Add to it. It's a good story. Phil
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Posted: March 17th, 2011, 11:28pm
San Diego, California
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Thanks for the read and your input! I'm glad you liked it. Good idea - a future rewrite will consider that. Thanks again. Greg
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