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BillyJ
Posted: January 3rd, 2021, 4:26pm Report to Moderator
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Hey does anyone want to do a dystopian swap? I’ll do anything though i wouldn’t mind reviewing any script and review the whole thing?

Here’s the script - ‘Advance, Britannia’
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-Scifi/m-1609699825/

I got some good feedback from FrankH I will paste on there too,  first time writing sci-fi dystopian so abit of a learning curve. Thankyou.



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Matthew Taylor
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Hi Billy

I do like dystopian future stories, so will give it a read at some point - It may come in dribs and drabs though.

I don't' have anything for you to read, so no need for a swap.


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Hey Matthew Thankyou very much I appreciate that. Good you’re British too makes it easier to understand some references. Let me know if you need anything read.


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Hey Bill, if you commit to a read of my  first 80 pages of  new feature  I posted on this board I swill do my first read through this weekend.  Let mw know.


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Also Ben! Yes please! Which one slow motion car crash?


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