Night of the Living Dead: Elegy by Christopher Pender - Horror, Zombie - Ten years later, the dead walk once again. 110 pages - pdf format

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Hi Christopher, first of all great job on getting a feature written! A whole feat in itself! You should be proud!

Unfortunately I couldn't read it because the formatting is completely wrong. People are not going to want to read it as it is. It's hard to get people to read features even when they are formatted correctly.... So take a look at some of the produced scripts on this site and scripts from other writers here. Or take a look on the net for free or paid screenwriting software. I got FadeIn for less than a hundred bucks.

Copy and paste this to get to the writers resources page. (It's on the left hand side on the home page under more navigation)........https://www.simplyscripts.com/WR_resource.html. There is a section on formatting.

Get it formatted correctly and put it back on here. And if you have any questions just ask, there's lots of cool people on here willing to help... .

Kirsten gave you some great advice, Christopher. Hope to see you around the boards.