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Mego73
Posted: December 28th, 2019, 5:08pm Report to Moderator
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My oft revised logline for my space fantasy fairy tail:

Destiny propels princess like heroes into battle with an evil tyrant. All to keep him from abducting refugees from many worlds and destroying all life on a little known, faraway world, that harbors an amazing secret... A world called Earth.
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Hello - I'm assuming this has nothing to do with the film "The Land That Time Forgot"

Reads a bit messy at the moment.

Who is the protagonist? is there a single princess like hero* driving the narrative?

*Princess like heroes is an odd phrase, what do you mean by it? they are dressed like princesses?


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Two steps to writing a good screenplay:
1) Write a bad one
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Hello - I'm assuming this has nothing to do with the film "The Land That Time Forgot"

Reads a bit messy at the moment.

Who is the protagonist? is there a single princess like hero* driving the narrative?

*Princess like heroes is an odd phrase, what do you mean by it? they are dressed like princesses?


Same thoughts for me


My Scripts can all be seen here:

https://dlambertson.wixsite.com/scripts
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Mego73
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Thanks both of you. I have since amended it to be "Two princess like heroes" since we are talking about 2.
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Why say " Two princess like heroes" ? if they act heroic why not just say so?

Two heroic princesses throw themselves in the path of an evil tyrant in order to save a distant world.
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