Hello all,

Here is my logline for review.

Known for his hilarious prank phone calls, a popular radio DJ may have played his last prank as the joke turns into a life-or-death circumstance.

Thank you in advance for any feedback that you can provide.

Hi there,

Welcome to SS.

I think your logline works fine. It gives a clear picture of what to expect.

Good luck with it.  

Can you not shorten this...

"Known for his hilarious prank phone calls, a popular radio DJ..."

to this...

"A popular DJ prankster..."

I liked the first part “Known for his prank phone calls, a popular DJ”
The rest didn’t draw my attention. I think it could be more concrete. As it is, it’s vague and the only thing it does is suggests a thriller. It could be more maybe

Quoted from Matthew Taylor Can you not shorten this... "Known for his hilarious prank phone calls, a popular radio DJ..." to this... "A popular DJ prankster..."

I agree!

Hello! … popular radio DJ. I like that. I wouldn’t change it. I think popular DJ prankster leads us to believe he might be a club DJ or a wedding DJ or whatever else. Radio DJ offers clarity.

My issue is the end of this. Life or death circumstance is a bit ambiguous. And who is the recipient of this life or death circumstance?

Cool concept.

Don't think you need hilarious - prank gets at it already.

Like Kham - I'd like a little more specifics on the last part -