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dogglebe |
Posted: May 3rd, 2006, 10:51pm |
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I writing a script where a prisoner is interviewed by law enforcement. Does anyone know the name of this room? Right now, I'm just referring to it as an interview room, but that just doesn't sound right.
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Shelton |
Posted: May 3rd, 2006, 11:27pm |
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Yeah Phil, I think it's an interrogation room as well. |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 3rd, 2006, 11:40pm |
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I was thinking interview room. You really don't need to interrogate someone who's already been convicted, y'know?
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Shelton |
Posted: May 3rd, 2006, 11:46pm |
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Quoted from tomson
Yeah, but it's probably still done in the same room, unless they have a special "post interrogation" room.
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Yeah, that's called the "ass-whipping" room. No cameras in there. But I do think it's an interrogation room by name. It just serves both purposes. |
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Shelton |
Posted: May 3rd, 2006, 11:56pm |
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Hahaha Tomson, You should check out The Scorsese Club thread. |
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Old Time Wesley |
Posted: May 3rd, 2006, 11:59pm |
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LocationOntario, Canada Posts2908 Posts Per Day 0.38 |
Like one of those rooms where the prisoner is separated by glass like in Half Baked? Or where they're sitting together with other prisoners around visiting their families like in Oz?
I watch a lot of tv, what can I say? |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 8:54am |
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Like one of those rooms where the prisoner is separated by glass like in Half Baked? Or where they're sitting together with other prisoners around visiting their families like in Oz?
I watch a lot of tv, what can I say? |
I'm thinking along the lines where the prisoner would have a one-on-one conversation with someone. Like a lawyer, where privacy is desired. Phil |
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bert |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 9:32am |
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LocationThat's me in the corner Posts4233 Posts Per Day 0.61 |
Quoted from dogglebe ...where the prisoner would have a one-on-one conversation with someone...like a lawyer... |
Is it "like" a lawyer, or is it, in fact, a lawyer? If you believe the rules of "movie world", these conversations often take place within the confines of a prison cell. |
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Martin |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 9:34am |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 9:59am |
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Is it "like" a lawyer, or is it, in fact, a lawyer?
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The scene is actually for my sequel to The Burnout (if you folks haven't read it, read it now!). In the scene I'm writing, Whitey (still with the FBI) visits Nick Schroeder in prison. Phil |
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Helio |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 10:07am |
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How about to download San Quentin or a less famous prision plaint, Phil? |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 11:00am |
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I'm not sure I understand what you said there, Helio, but I doubt I can download the blueprints to any prison.
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Helio |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 11:06am |
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Maybe you are right, but if you get it please send me a copy, because I need to get out from here as soon as I can, mate!!! Oh, If I continue here, bring me a pack of cigarette, please!
I'm kidding, Phil! Hehe! |
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Shelton |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 1:19pm |
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You can't have plants in prison, not enough sunlight. If Whitey is visiting Nick in prison, that sounds more like they would be sitting across from each other, separated by glass, and talking through telephone recievers. |
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Helio |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 1:32pm |
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Mike, Mike, Mike -hehe - I meant Prison Plan! |
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FilmMaker06 |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 1:51pm |
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This was a pretty quick a fun read. Format, story, characters, everything was great.
The only thing I found was that there was a typo at the end of page 2:
CARL (V.O.) Each of my calls would documented. - Shouldn't there be a "be" in there?
Anyway, I don't have much time to review, but like I said, it was a great read!
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 2:03pm |
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Chris was referring to Suicide , one of my short scripts. Not sure why he posted a comment here. Chris, can you post something for me on the Suicide thread? Bump it up to the top of the list? Phil |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 2:04pm |
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If Whitey is visiting Nick in prison, that sounds more like they would be sitting across from each other, separated by glass, and talking through telephone recievers.
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As Whitey is there on bureau business, these arrangements would be allowed. Phil |
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Mr.Z |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 4:40pm |
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The place Mike describes is called 'Visitation Area' in 'The life of David Gale' script. |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 5:41pm |
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In the script I'm working on, it would be a one-on-one talk, in private. The big visitation room wouldn't be appropriate.
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Shelton |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 5:59pm |
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I'd say use either interview or interrogation room. If I saw either one of those I would probably picture the same thing in my head anyway. Is there anything special about the room that you're planning on describing, or is it just a table with a couple of chairs?
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 8:06pm |
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The rabid monkey was in The Burnout. And it was a clothes hamper. Didn't you read it? Actually, there was no rapid monkey. Nor was there a hamper. You should still read it, though. Phil |
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Shelton |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 8:12pm |
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I read that a loooooong time ago. |
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bert |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 8:13pm |
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A little off topic here, but not really...
How far along is Tower, anyway?
Is that still the title?
Just curious (and offering up a free chance for ya' to plug away haha). |
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dogglebe |
Posted: May 4th, 2006, 8:31pm |
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I'm a little better than a third of the way through the script (first draft).
In this sequel, Whitey learns a little bit about what the Citizens had in mind for those from Project: Interface. It's not just another opportunity for Whitey to kick ass.
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