Yo, Thom,
This is the very first play that I have ever read. And it was fun. The liberty you gave at the very beginning of the play regarding the cast and the location made it very pocket-friendly and easy for any potential play-seeker to adjust as per their wish.
The ending was pretty funny so to speak since this a comedy play(duh). I have to admit that the red big thing that the last customer bought, pictured something different in my mind, which I think you could find in the shop. But nonetheless, the actual red thing also played very well and made me laugh. I wondered what the customer will do with it? Not sure how it would really help the customer in his/her bad time? Lol.
Anyways, a really nice play.
Good luck.
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