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Rob S.
Posted: August 13th, 2004, 9:58am Report to Moderator
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Andrea, the rat thing did happen.  I personally didn't see it, but I trust the person who told me.  He never lied to me.

BTW, I wasn't involved in egging the Principal's car.  I'm plead innocent.

"Heart:  Not for the Faint Of" was great.  I liked it a lot.  It touched me in a very emotional way.


Your best feature is your heart and soul.
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lesleyjl21
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“Your Disappointment”

Beneath my black coat I hide
Flipping up the collar
Tucking inside the ends of my hair
Wishing I’d just put it up
Or something  
So you wouldn’t look at me like that

I pull my coat tightly  
Trying to become invisible
Because you are honest
You say why that shirt
With those jeans
As we walk out the door
I mean
I like the shirt but
Those jeans...don't work
'Cause...you’re fat
But not that fat
And why do you always
Wear your hair the same way

He has criticized for so many years now
It's funny how
I never questioned my self-esteem
Before

In the morning
In the elevator
I don’t look him in the eye
I drop my head
I can’t take it today
I wonder why it is I am
never the critical one
with all his faults
I never say anything like that

But I realize now
Why is it so hard for me
To look a guy
In the eye

Because I feel his stare
And I am waiting for him
To echo you
To say what I already know
Is permanently ingrained
Because unbeknownst to me
It always has been

But if I say anything to you
Let you know how your disappointment
Makes me feel

You will never say anything to me
ever again.


....based on real life.


true love waits... i guess.
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Rob S.
Posted: August 13th, 2004, 3:15pm Report to Moderator
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Your poem sparked something inside of me, memories of someone I cared for a lot.

"Forgiveness Out of Reach"

I watched from afar
As you tore her down.
Your pure ruthlessness
Which has no bounds,
Destroyed her soul.

Family, you once said,
Meant everything to you.
You preach compassion
But those words never
Never sunk in.
Your dark heart
Couldn't bear to hear
The importance of
Loving others more
Than loving yourself.

You didn't care how many
Lives you ruined as long as
You felt proud in the end.
The thought of you and
The things you did and said
Turns my stomach,
Surfacing emotions I
Thought didn't exist in me.

I couldn't let you continue
Hurting her in that way.

I won't let you
Tear her down
Piece by piece,
Bit by bit,
Just to prove your power
Over a helpless girl
Too afraid to fight back.

She backed down and
She hung her head low.
All her confidence stolen.
Her wonderful spirit, gone.
I had to get my friend
Out of your place.

She got out from your
Awful home of horror.
But I came too late.
I was powerless
To restore her spirit
And give her a sense
Of happiness and
Security away from hell.

Now, I look at her, but
She can't see me.
I speak to her, but
Am sad I won't hear
Her gentle voice again.

Are you proud of
Yourself now?
Is this what you
wanted all along?

-Dedicated to the memory of a friend I will never forget, and to her father who I will never forgive.


Your best feature is your heart and soul.
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lesleyjl21
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Oh God.  I think I'm going to cry... You have this capability of hitting the nail on the head every time.  I don't know how.  I don't.  Ugh.  I hate when I'm like this... God.

Thanks for that.  Rob, thank you so, so much.  

I swear I feel like I'm in a "Fight Club" support group.
Free and clear.


true love waits... i guess.
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AndreaJones
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She would've loved that poem, Rob.  She always loved your work, no matter what it was.  I cry every time I think of her.  It's so sad.  I wish she was still here.  I miss her.


http://www.geocities.com/candrwritingcenter

Has logic, philosophy, poetry, short stories, discussion forum and more.  Plus, an NBA preview for all you sports fans out there.
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Rob S.
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I feel so guilty now.  I made people sad.


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Paula-Hanes
Posted: August 14th, 2004, 11:59am Report to Moderator
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The only poem I know from heart:

Way down south where the bananas grow.
A grasshopper stepped on an elephants toe.
The elephant said with tears in his eyes,
"pick on someone your own size"
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Rob S.
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That's really cool, funny too.

"Computer"

The big button with "POWER"
Written underneath it.  See
It?  Good, now push it, not
Too hard.  You can break it.
Hear that noise?  See the
Monitor?  It's on now.

Up comes Microsoft Windows,
The crappy OS we programmers
Hate.  Bill Gates is so filthy rich,
He doesn't care his products
Are bad.  Click on your username,
Type your secret password.  What,
You forgot it?  Did you remember
To write it down?  Oh, you did,
That's good.  Take out your
Little piece of paper and type it in.
You have to press enter.  Good job.

You must wait for it.
It's loading up, you see.
It takes a minute.
Hum if you like, but
Do it quietly.  It's done.
We can now begin.

Click on the start button
On the bottom of the screen.
See, you have Word and
The wonderful internet.
Are you over eighteen?
Got a valid credit card?
You are, you do.
Ha, you'll love the
Internet then.  I'll
give you a tour.

You know Word, right?
It's a word processor.
I never use the thing.
I hate it more than
Watching a Gigli marathon.
I use Sun Microsystems'
StarOffice 7.  Buy it.

This isn't good.  Smoke's
Coming out of your
Computer.  There it goes,
Up in flames.  It's on
Fire.  Watch it burn.
Look at the sparks.
It's 4th of July in here.

That's what you get
For buying a Gateway
From the back of a van.


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TheParadoxicalShaman
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WOW!! leave for awhile, and suddenly there's a wealth of poetry here!!

Rob is fast becoming a competitor in this liberal board....i liked your stuff

and of course, lesley never fails to amaze me


keep up the good work as well traditionne!


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lesleyjl21
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REALLY, shaman?  Wow, best compliment ever...
Alas you have more talent in your pinky finger than I for rhyming.  
It sounds so natural when you write it.

I am swept up in your poetry.  It's so fluid...


true love waits... i guess.
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lesleyjl21
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I thought this was cute.  Came up with a few years back.  A dumb little ditty.

"I Exist"

I am the girl who pours your coffee,
your pizza delivery guy.
I was the operator of the last thrill ride you were on,
And the date who made you sigh.

When you felt really low
I was there to comfort you
When you needed a hug I came.
I never missed a single tennis match
and I was there for every basketball game.

Who am I, you question in wonder?
Quite frankly, I’m no one really.
I style your hair every now and then
So you don’t go out looking silly.

I remember your name and smile
When we pass by one another
I’m honest when I say
you’d look so much better
Wearing a different color.

Come on now, who am I?
Why, I am everyone.
I am your favorite band member,
I am your neighbor’s son.

I am the cop who writes your speeding ticket
The salesman who sells you your car
I am the pilot who flies your airplane
So you can travel afar.

I am up high, I am down low
I am the one you hire
To shovel your snow
Choose to captain
Or choose to row
This much is certain
I am no one you know.


true love waits... i guess.
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Rob S.
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I liked it a lot.  It really hit close to home for me.


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Here's one...in my style, once again....that I wrote for a girl called Faith...

The Faith of the Heart


In the darkest halls on the darkest nights
Where my fear and loneliness so combined
Then mingle with the thoughts of my lost light
And all I've ever loved I've yet to find

I could never choose such a life without
The comfort of my well-known solitude
And yet by grace and beauty there's no doubts
That knowing you has been my minds true food

Nourished by the sun your face does mimic
Or rather by your ultimate kindness
Perhaps by compassion you exhibit
Or the timeless smile of your likeness

That I could spend a lifetime in such mirth
That I should feel eternal all your love
And know that love is braided in your firth,
That lovely ballad from the lips of doves

A smile such as yours could change the world
To bring to grief and sorrow but a kiss
That heals all the wounds our race has curdled
With the real magic brightness of your bliss

Even you who walk the clouds so very high
And lend hand to vanquishing all evil
Should be so blest and painted on the sky
Hidden away from arrows, stones, and steel

So let this be what I could never say
For I have not the courage of a warrior
But I would wish you well if you can't stay
For you have given Faith to all you capture


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That is so awesome and touching, shaman.  Did you ever at all give that one to her?  I know she would have probably cried...because I think that one is beautiful.

That would really move me anyway, having poetry written about me.  There's a little song in Spanish about me that these guys I used to work with made up.  It's pretty funny.  They would sing it to make me laugh (and taught me a lot of Spanish I know but I'm not fluent), but... sigh.  

Never any poems written about me.


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hahah...well i don't think she cried, but i did give it to her...

no poems about you??

tsk, tsk...we'll have to change that
lol


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