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Sickly intention borne to cunning ends That weeps crimson tears of fatality Blaspheme stagnant tasks it cannot mend Through rosy veils some reality
And tempered within a seething furnace Revenge insidious instigation Melds with chrome, obsidian blade burnished Purpose moulded in vendettas salvation
Burning desire to rout and to wreak A catharsis of melancholy wiles Vampiric embrace, a thief scorns the meek Collapsing honours walls like veins defiled
No solution in death, none too in life For mistaken of welcome apogee If not in blood, wheres the end to our strife? Condemned to the yoke of our savagery
Hearth of stone in cradle of sanctity Nestled 'tween the white robes that suffocate Where, eloquent, resides some harmony Guarded by an emerald sentinels mandate
Where lucid consciousness scorns ignorance Reflects my image manifestation That bends like waves, and flows in brilliance Falls from skies as sweet tears in it's patience
The denizens of various actions Furred, feathered, clawed, winged, abound in their mirth Mete predation with predators passion Soothe instincts rites of bequeathed and the birthed
Survivals destiny written in sands Of sanguine eras and lost, endless lands
Anticipate such a beckoning flight, Wherein reprisal of freedom allows, Upon a nestling cloak of sundry white Where boundless borders common seeds are sowed
Every compass shadowed in icy doubt Yet summoned by ancestral spirits guile To appease endless sacrificial rout In supplicant endeavours we revile
Taste the shuriken of Natures sweetness As wooden legs dive like dolphins beneath Elegantly stumble like feigned weakness Where Winter scathe hubris with sword unsheathed
To sing of sun-blanched immaculate planes Where arbitrary choices find their bane
When Shaman writes, he distances himself from his words. He feels them but from a stiffly professional standpoint. I think of old English royalty having tea in the castle garden. When everyone interacts with one other from a certain amount of polite distance, an impersonal formality. Remember Rose aboard the Titanic?
You are careful to rhyme. You don't free flow. And as you say this was an English assignment, so I detect that internal need to make it as eloquent as possible, perhaps in Shakespearean style.
For you, I would like to see how you write when you aren't thinking to rhyme or conscious of it being due as homework.
Lesley that was great. I applaud the way you interpreted it and what you said was absolutely correct. I really appreciate your support that was very kind of you. Thank you very much.
I tell you these poems are great. I cannot pick out a certain poem that isn't deep. Specially Lesly and Shaman.
Alan, I like the song. It is very well written for your series and I like the response Banana said, that was great. You bring a comical edge to your writing and that is a good style.
I am one to prefer dark poems at times. I will post some more of my peoms here in a second and you can tell me if the other ones i posted were better than these new ones, if you could? If you like them at all.
I will try to give my interpretations of what you say here soon I am a bit busy and surprised how much great poetry has just came out of here. Keep writing, Lesley and Shaman that is really good. Alan, keep it coming I want to see more of the lighter side (more banana chan comments!). Thanks you have made my day.
I love Shamans writing. It is more narrative it feels though. Using the splashing of large words. Nevertheless, it is very well done, you must have gone through them over and over again to edit them?
I don't have time to edit my poetry I just came up with it in class when I was bored and I was feeling shitty so that is what I wrote.
lesley, your words have really impacted me and the whole sense of my writing being raw and more emotional I am glad someone point out what I can't find in myself.
I have noticed I sometimes must be in a certain mood in order to write effectively. Any of you have that same feeling?
Naked in the scouring moonlight, Through a legion of whores, I find a door, Wood a rusted yellow Withered by times musty bellow
Upon its open, there is a light A stream of heavy white so bright, Likeness not of that from time but spiritual delight
From my steps I follow through, My curious nature I know no mood What I search for I find at last A place of rest for my worn out hat
Deaths Calling:
Rhine of beauty she stretches far and the glory seeker makes his mark What he thought he could not comprehend nor understand the fear in hand And when blasts of fire and the charging men that destroyed countless towns around the land
There lies a man in fright Every day death consumes his life Where he thought there be a simple end fear destroyed his good intent
Fire and smoke that rains upon his head and to fall behind one will meet a sudden end When neither earth nor tree can protect from the violent cheers and screams There is no end to time or man
And where he thought he find himself he only found humanities restlessness When the screams and cannons fill his world There is no lasting peace in the smoke filled air
What do you think? Deaths calling is a dedication to WW2 veterans by the way.
the Still Man: The hyperspace to its never-ending process Blank faces of lonely people To tell the truths of their dotted world Vague and distant is in this world And where thoughts of loyalty and justice Betrayal and superficial greatness permeates Dismissing thoughts of connection, where the heart could feel home A fire has eaten the richness of the new and replaced with the old A world of negativity and status that never existed but in mind To break free it ends a world thought known but absent A lasting hope of a rekindled time
Self Doubt: When I try to think clever I feel nothing but a fools fellow My poem just ill spelled of a uneducated manner
The room is still and silent now I try to write a witches spell But what I do is not firm, separated and fragmented as the worm
Tonight I write alone in bed, mind flicking of thoughts of them I improve myself in a world unknown to me For this I search and forever a slave to be
I am not sure if this verse fits with the rest of the poem but it was originally written with it. what you think?'
Once I mind of myself, it is nothing special that makes me unique Where I thought I finally stand there was no brace in the broken slab To fall, I do not know instead to let it take my tortured soul
As human beings we tend to dwell most on surging emotions like depression or love and hearts beating quickly, because of the endorphins. That's when we are most conscious of what we feel and have a need to chart the pattern of the emotion.
I'm glad you didn't edit what you wrote. You shouldn't even now. I believe poetry is in its greatest form when it is free flowing and unedited.
Beautiful job.
Oh wow, you got your stuff in there while I was writing... delayed post. hang on I'll write more in a minute.
I like to talk to you about it personally through instant messanger but not to much on a message board.
I have only written 9 poems in the last couple of days but how I write reminds me a lot of these famous poets (I am not compariing myself to them) such as robert Lowell who went through depression and such and wrote it to make great peoms that are still loved to this day. If you met me you wouldn't see a very different side than the one I write. I guess this is called "confessional poetry" I believe.