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Bojangles
Posted: October 5th, 2006, 5:42pm
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How would you go about changing from a person's point of view to normal view? For example: POV OF PERSON (Action) (Then how do I switch back to normal)?
Helio
Posted: October 5th, 2006, 8:19pm
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Here is an excerpt from Thelma and Louise: A huge semi-tanker carrying gas passes them on the highway and HONKS. The mud flaps are the shiny silhouettes of naked women. There is a bumper sticker on the back that says: "Lick you all over -- ten cents." LOUISE One of your friends? Thelma is watching herself in the side mirror, pretending to smoke a cigarette. THELMA'S POV OF A SIGN alongside the road that reads "See you in church on Sunday!" Thelma pushes in the lighter and waits for it to pop out. Louise gives her a sidelong glance, but does not say anything.
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Zombie Sean
Posted: October 5th, 2006, 8:39pm
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I usually write it as: EXT. CAMP - NIGHT Five campers sit around a fire, making s'mores. UNKNOWN BEING'S POV It crawls on the ground, peeking through the bushes, and looking at the oblivious campers. EXT. CAMP - NIGHT There is a crackle. The campers become silent and look around, confused and afraid. Or I sometimes write it as: EXT. CAMP - NIGHT Five campers sita round a fire, making s'mores. UNKNOWN BEING'S POV It crawls on the ground, peeking through the bushes, and looking at the oblivious campers. BACK TO SCENE There is a crackle. The campers become silent and look around, confused and afraid. Sean
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dogglebe
Posted: October 5th, 2006, 10:23pm
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Using POV in a spec script is very taboo unless you really really need a particular viewpoint. Editing Sean's example a little and you have: EXT. CAMP - NIGHT Five campers sita round a fire, making s'mores. An UNKNOWN FIGURE stands in the dark woods. He watches them, studying every move they make. Shifting his weight, he steps on a twig-- CRACK! The campers become silent and look around, confused and afraid. The director decides what the shots are, not the writer. Phil
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George Willson
Posted: October 6th, 2006, 8:09am
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I'm with Phil on this one. Just say someone watches them from the shadows or whatever. One way to emphasize this is to sue secondary headings. You can write it almost exactly as Phil has it with a slight variation. EXT. CAMP - NIGHT Five campers sit a round a fire, making s'mores. AN UNKNOWN FIGURE watches them from the dark woods, studying every move they make. Shifting his weight, he steps on a twig-- CRACK! The campers become silent and look around, confused and afraid. Secondary headings are a way for us to control the perspective just a little more thatn just using action paragraphs and focus on something specific.
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Bojangles
Posted: October 6th, 2006, 8:09am
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Okay, so no POV unless it is needed. Thanks a lot, and sorry for all my questions. I finally have a chance to learn from real screenwriters.
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