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Bruce3456
Posted: March 9th, 2006, 6:20pm Report to Moderator
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The new episodes takes place a few months after the events in the Season 3 finale as indicated in the opening montage.

But basically he got out very shortly afterward after his parents bailed him out.


Everything Must End...

The Final Episode of The Lunchroom
Coming Summer 2010
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DOM
Posted: March 10th, 2006, 1:57pm Report to Moderator
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Right. Thanks, Bruce. Just read "Comfortably Numb" and it was amazing. For some reason, it made more sense backwards. I don't know why, I guess I'm just weird. Any plans for a ninth episode? Cos I'm on the edge of my seat with Stacy's story.
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Bruce3456
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Sadly, the next episode will be Stacy's final episode. It's called "Good Riddance" and is about about her and Brian's trip to the airport. Along the way Stacy decides it's time Brian knew some "things."


Everything Must End...

The Final Episode of The Lunchroom
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DOM
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Bruce, I've noticed that the episode lengths vary. I took a look into this, and these were the results:

THINGS FALL APART- 18:29
A TALE OF TWO BRIDES- 11:38
SCREW YOUR SPIRIT- 9:27
HOPE FOR THE BEST, EXPECT THE WORST- 16:14
ALL YOUR FRIENDS ARE DOING IT- 8:16
TESTING BURNS- 11:26
POLITICALLY INCORRECT- 19: 48
JOIN THE ARMY- 7:56
WHAT WAS THAT?- 21:23
BAD DAY- 10:52

AGAINST THE MADNESS- 13:41
THE RISK- 11:19
I'M UP HERE- 19:21
COMICS & COMEDIANS- 14:11
COLD BLUE- 12:15
PROZAC CANDY- 12:53
SUICIDALS DESERVE TO DIE- 13:45
NEVER MIND THE BOLLOCKS- 14:56
KIRK'S PARTY- 13:49
FAST CAR- 17:01
FARENHEIT 7/11- 14:09
FOOLING MYSELF- 16:22
TROUBLE IN MIND- 14:29

I will look at seasons 3 & 4 soon. By the way, I'm also writing a series. How do I post in PDF?
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Just out of curiosity how did you get those estimates?
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DOM
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I had used the timer on my clock. It has seconds, minutes and hours.
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DOM
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Okay, I've also timed Season 3 and I think they're long enough, which is great because I think Season 3 is the best one.

INSTANT KARMA- 15:44
MASTER DEBATORS- 18:32
SPECIAL NEEDS- 14:12
GOD HATES ACTORS- 16:17
THE CAMPING TRIP- 19:06
BY ALL MEANS- 15:02
REALITY BITES- 16:42
WITH FRIENDS LIKE THESE- 20:03
SHADES OF GREY- 22:36
HEART'S PLACE- 18:49
SLOW FUSE- 23:04
EVERYBODY HURTS- 19:24
THE LAST TIME- 26:43

Also, will I be receiving these rewrites any time soon? Cause obviously I'll be giving the BBC Season 1 first, and I think it would be better if I gave them the improved version. Sorry, don't want to sound impatient. By the way, there may be a problem. The director said that he would still air it, but he thought that "Politically Incorrect" was quite racist.
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i think there should be more of Ellen Conner on the show. She's the best character ever.
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No way. Casey's the best. Casey to me is what Star Wars is to Brian.
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DOM
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Bruce, when will you (or whoever posts episodes) be posting Ep. 9?
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Bruce3456
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Hopefully we're going to be sending it in either tomorrow or Sunday.


Everything Must End...

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Episode 01 "Heaven Can Wait"


Spelling errors… I’ll underline the word that’s wrong. It’s up to you to find it as page numbers aren’t present.

This time his is hooking some wires around his neck.

He has a shaving blade I his hand.

I can't even do the one thing Kurt Cubain did right.

Tell 'em your going to the movies with a friend.

He was very noted for stopping his carriage to talk to he trees.

You know, I can't talk with you. Your drunk.

A big smile comes across her face. To this Parker gives her a look ands slams the door.

He bandage is off and they are examining his wound.

Finally Chris is able to push her a away.

Kate's anger has seemed to quickly to changed to apologetic and worrisome.

MR. ZIMMER, the Geography teacher and the school nurse, NURSE ROBERTS sit at on of the four tables in the room.

Look...we both hate each other. T here's really no way around.

I've only know you for like ten minutes and already you find my failure funny?

We do a QUICK PAN to the LEFT and we see CATHY PHENIS all the way on the other end of the lunchroom. – Try not to use we as much, it’s not necessary when CATHY PHENIS stands at the other end of the lunchroom would suffice.

Have you ever watched Degrassi? Reading this I feel like you were inspired by Degrassi (In a good way) Well that mixed with Dawson’s Creek and a comedy.

At times the teachers seem more childish then the kids, I don’t know if I like the teachers all that much. You should try to focus as little as possible on them as you’ve already got a lot of characters.

I enjoyed reading the episode; way too much happens though which drags the episode on. You could take this episode and make it two different ones because at times it just drops into a lot of different directions. The episode you had me write had one direction but I’m just not sure about this one.

Good episode but it has split personalities at times.


Practice safe lunch: Use a condiment.
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DOM
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I thought it was a good thing to go in different directions. If there's just one story in an episode it gets boring.
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DOM
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Do I need an outbox to post scripts?
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Hey Private Dick, I disagree with the assertion that this show can be compared to Dawson's Creek. Other than the fact that it, too, is set in a rural high school, they are completely dissimilar. The tone and mood of the show is completely different from the lameass Dawson's Creek. It's a comedy, for Christ's sake! Plus, thankfully, they don't use ridiculously pretentious language like "capra-esque" or "philistine." The dialogue in the show is representative of real high schoolers, and that's what makes it so genuine and fun.
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