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Posted: September 4th, 2023, 2:00pm Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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Overcoming the limits of love by Lorena Venticinque - Series, Drama, Love - It's not the limits of your past that deprive you of loving. 472 pages - pdf format

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Posted: September 5th, 2023, 3:55am Report to Moderator

The Great Southern Land
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Hi Lorena, I gave this a look and my advice is this:
I suggest you post a Pilot Episode of your series, otherwise 472 pages is very daunting.

Also CAP your characters on first intro.
Is English your first language? Some of your dialogue is a bit stilted and missing prepositions.

Happy to offer more advice if you're around.
A couple of links to help below.

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Posted: September 5th, 2023, 1:12pm Report to Moderator

All my work is available for purchase.

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Far too long to read through. Break it down and pilot the first episode.

Enough said.

Challenging the status quo and pushing the boundaries of acceptance.

Any genre. Anytime. Anywhere. All I want to do is write for you.
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