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callinsky
Posted: September 29th, 2007, 7:22pm Report to Moderator
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Steel,
Posted this in the wrong spot the first time.

I really enjoyed this.  I loved the descriptions.   I love the overweight, beer drinkin’, chain smokin’ character.

I love how the story seamlessly goes from the now to the written story as the now.   The violence in the middle of bed scene was cool .    

I liked the description of the antique store.  It felt magical.  I liked that he didn’t test the typewriter.  Testing it would have taken away from the magic.  He knew it would work … magic.  

I even liked the one liner at the end.  I usually don’t like ‘em.  
Very well done.

~Cindy
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Hey guys! The third draft's been posted.

This'll be the last draft.
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