I got my hands on a new draft of this script, hot off the press so to speak.

So all the complaints above with dialouge I did not notice.

Sure it was on the nose and spelt out what happened, but hey what can you do? Most of your story take place in a cell in a medievial dungeon.

The twist at end was alright with the eye for an eye attitude, but I thought this story was a bit tedious in getting to that twist. Relied to much on flash backs.

The medievil setting was very cool and visualy interesting with filthy peasents huddled in a filthy stone cell.  
  

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it

I thought I had the 'on the nose dialogue' problem fixed...guess I'll have to take an extra look at it! The flashbacks were used to get out of the cell for a little bit, bringing in some 'fresh air' into the dark setting. I'd like to keep them in the script, but I'll see if I can tweak them a bit so they don't spoil too much of the story.

Cheers!