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Unlikely Temptations - Watch It! Like It! (currently 10317 views) |
Mr.Ripley |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 2:05pm |
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Screw Sundance. They don't know what they lost. Good luck with the others. |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 2:34pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
California? Great scouting. It looks like the middle east somewhere. Looks amazing! There's an area in New Mexico, not too far from Albuquerque, if I remember correctly that looks just like how you'd imagine Mars. I swear all the movies made to look like Mars were shot there. All the sand and rocks are a rusty red and nothing grows there. The western US really has some incredible looking landscapes! |
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Posted: February 6th, 2016, 2:43pm |
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LocationThat's me in the corner Posts4233 Posts Per Day 0.61 |
The script is actually pretty funny. I went back to look and liked it a lot. Nice one.
This production looks great so far. Will be curious to see what they do with the rest of it. |
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irish eyes |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 5:46pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Quoted from Gabe Screw Sundance. They don't know what they lost. Good luck with the others.
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Thanks Gabe, that's what I say
Quoted from Pia California? Great scouting. It looks like the middle east somewhere. Looks amazing!
There's an area in New Mexico, not too far from Albuquerque, if I remember correctly that looks just like how you'd imagine Mars. I swear all the movies made to look like Mars were shot there. All the sand and rocks are a rusty red and nothing grows there. The western US really has some incredible looking landscapes! |
Yeah he's based in LA... Shoots a lot of music videos out there.
The script is actually pretty funny. I went back to look and liked it a lot. Nice one.
This production looks great so far. Will be curious to see what they do with the rest of it. |
Thanks Bert. He put a lot of money and time into it, really looks great. |
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DanC |
Posted: April 6th, 2016, 2:22pm |
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LocationBuffalo NY Posts1131 Posts Per Day 0.34 |
Hey Mark, Thanks for sending me the links to your stories.
This was funny. Really funny. And the promo looks amazing. You did a great job.
I read all the comments too. I'd like to add a few:
1. You should have some indication this is his 40 days and nights walkabout. Why not a voice over, by the Devil?
2. I liked the gags, sort of. The bubble-wrap stuff was funny. The others were okay. I'd go with women, rock and roll, and something else, and have Jesus be a smart ass to Satan.
I think the only thing that I didn't care for was that Jesus was just like "Be gone Satan." and didn't really say something clever back. Why would he believe that Mary would say something bad about him, or do you mean his "wife" Mary? I initially thought it was Mary, his mom...
Other then that, great job. It was funny, it was a fast easy read...
Dan
ps, great job getting it made!! |
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irish eyes |
Posted: April 9th, 2016, 10:12am |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Quoted from DanC Hey Mark, Thanks for sending me the links to your stories.
This was funny. Really funny. And the promo looks amazing. You did a great job.
I read all the comments too. I'd like to add a few:
1. You should have some indication this is his 40 days and nights walkabout. Why not a voice over, by the Devil?
2. I liked the gags, sort of. The bubble-wrap stuff was funny. The others were okay. I'd go with women, rock and roll, and something else, and have Jesus be a smart ass to Satan.
I think the only thing that I didn't care for was that Jesus was just like "Be gone Satan." and didn't really say something clever back. Why would he believe that Mary would say something bad about him, or do you mean his "wife" Mary? I initially thought it was Mary, his mom...
Other then that, great job. It was funny, it was a fast easy read...
Dan
ps, great job getting it made!! |
Thanks again for the read and review. The temptations changed numerous times for the producer. The bubble wrap(which apparently is everyone's fav) is the only temptation that survived |
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Don |
Posted: April 7th, 2017, 2:29pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16438 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
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SAC |
Posted: April 7th, 2017, 2:35pm |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
Funny as hell, bro!! Was funnier second time around! |
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irish eyes |
Posted: April 7th, 2017, 2:59pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Thanks Don
Need all the likes we can on Vimeo fellow Peeps !!! appreciate it. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: April 7th, 2017, 3:49pm |
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Nice one - signed up for Vimeo and Liked - best of luck |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: April 7th, 2017, 6:39pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
That was FUNNY! Looked great! Great acting! Big congratulations! Voted too. |
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khamanna |
Posted: April 8th, 2017, 3:47am |
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Done! Yeah, that's a nice short! Good luck to you with it! |
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Reef Dreamer |
Posted: April 8th, 2017, 4:42am |
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LocationThe Island of Jersey Posts2612 Posts Per Day 0.56 |
Nice production - well done. |
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Mr.Ripley |
Posted: April 9th, 2017, 1:45am |
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LocationNew York Posts1979 Posts Per Day 0.30 |
Great job man. I would have liked if the original was shot but I was surprised in how they were able to input that sexy woman in there lol. Good luck and congrats man.
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irish eyes |
Posted: April 9th, 2017, 4:33pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Thank you all for support |
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