|
Author |
Unlikely Temptations - Watch It! Like It! (currently 10326 views) |
trickyb |
Posted: March 30th, 2013, 9:50am |
|
|
LocationVictoria, Australia Posts64 Posts Per Day 0.02 |
Hey Mark,
Great little sketch, very funny.
P2 Jesus pulls back his finger - at first glance I thought it said - Jesus says pull my finger, I thought, h,m interesting a counter temptation - would the midget have pulled his finger?
Michael |
| |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 45 - 79 |
|
|
irish eyes |
Posted: March 31st, 2013, 8:48pm |
|
|
January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
P2 Jesus pulls back his finger - at first glance I thought it said - Jesus says pull my finger, I thought, h,m interesting a counter temptation - would the midget have pulled his finger? |
I like that thought, maybe i'll use it in a future episode welcome to SS and thanks for the read Mark |
| |
|
|
|
Reply: 46 - 79 |
|
|
Don |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 6:28pm |
|
|
AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16438 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
|
| Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site.
------------- You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take. - Wayne Gretzky
|
|
|
|
Reply: 47 - 79 |
|
|
Reef Dreamer |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 6:39pm |
|
|
Old Timer Part time writer
LocationThe Island of Jersey Posts2612 Posts Per Day 0.56 |
What!!!
I want more....tell me the real thing will follow?
Good photography by the way.
What's happening.... |
| My scripts HERE
The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 48 - 79 |
|
|
AnthonyCawood |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 6:52pm |
|
|
January Project Group
LocationUK Posts4323 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
|
|
|
Reply: 49 - 79 |
|
|
eldave1 |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 6:56pm |
|
|
January Project Group
LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
In Search of Hysterical Jesus? |
| |
|
|
|
Reply: 50 - 79 |
|
|
irish eyes |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 7:16pm |
|
|
January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Wow! Thanks Don Sorry Bill, it's been entered into a lot film festivals and as I no longer own the rights I only get to see what the director gives me I haven't seen the full film myself. Thanks guys |
| |
|
|
|
Reply: 51 - 79 |
|
|
LC |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 8:40pm |
|
|
Administrator
LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7630 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Looking good, Irish! I mean, really pro. I also wanted moore... Ha, my stupid tablet did that so I left it in. |
| |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 52 - 79 |
|
|
Mr.Ripley |
Posted: February 5th, 2016, 9:47pm |
|
|
January Project Group Writing
LocationNew York Posts1979 Posts Per Day 0.30 |
Congrats man. That looks really good. |
| |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 53 - 79 |
|
|
DustinBowcot |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 3:58am |
|
|
Guest User
|
So I agree with alffy about that opening paragraph. The forty days/nights part we can't know. The tattered clothes and exhausted look on his face is enough IMO.
|
Merely writing 'tattered and exhausted' does not tell a full story. Without the forty days and nights part, then how exhausted and tattered would the actor know how to be? Not all information in a script has to be for the viewer, IMO. Well done on getting this filmed, I'll check it out tonight. |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 54 - 79 |
|
|
SAC |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 5:35am |
|
|
Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
This looks great, and Like Libby said, very professional. Can't wait to see the full version. Inthinknits gonna be a hoot! Congratulations.
Steve |
| |
|
|
|
Reply: 55 - 79 |
|
|
Demento |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 5:59am |
|
|
Been Around
Posts946 Posts Per Day 0.25 |
Looks great, seems funny.
Look forward to seeing the whole thing. Great job. |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 56 - 79 |
|
|
Gary in Houston |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 10:15am |
|
|
January Project Group
LocationTexas Posts1306 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
That trailer is pretty amazing, Mark! Where in the world was that filmed? It's a great look, for sure! Congrats! |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
|
|
|
|
Reply: 57 - 79 |
|
|
Electric Dreamer |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 11:09am |
|
|
Old Timer Taking a long vacation from the holidays.
LocationLos Angeles Posts2740 Posts Per Day 0.55 |
Great trailer, Mark! You should be super proud! I still remember reading your funny short back in the day. Can't wait to see the completed film. Please keep us up to speed on the project.
Regards, EDreamer |
| |
|
Logged |
|
|
|
Reply: 58 - 79 |
|
|
irish eyes |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 2:01pm |
|
|
January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Quoted from Libby Looking good, Irish!
I mean, really pro. I also wanted moore... Ha, my stupid tablet did that so I left it in. |
Aha I see what you did there Thanks Libby
Quoted from Gabe Congrats man. That looks really good. |
Thanks Buddy
Quoted from Dustin Well done on getting this filmed, I'll check it out tonight. |
Thanks Dustin
Quoted from Steve This looks great, and Like Libby said, very professional. Can't wait to see the full version. Inthinknits gonna be a hoot! Congratulations. |
Thank you kind sir... now get back to 'the Followers'
Quoted from Demento Looks great, seems funny.
Look forward to seeing the whole thing. Great job. |
Thanks... I look forward to seeing it myself
Quoted from Gary That trailer is pretty amazing, Mark! Where in the world was that filmed? It's a great look, for sure! Congrats! |
GARY!!!! what's happening bro? This was shot in Dumont Dunes north of Baker, California, or so I was told
Great trailer, Mark! You should be super proud! I still remember reading your funny short back in the day. Can't wait to see the completed film. Please keep us up to speed on the project. |
Hey stranger, what's going on Brett? You were one of the first to comment on this and helped me clean up a few punchlines. Greatly appreciated. This short has been entered in all the major film festivals in the US. Got turned down from Sundance which is the big one... apparently though they accepted a farting corpse movie, because Daniel Radcliffe is in it Thank you all for your kind remarks, as soon as I see the full movie, you'll be the first to know |
| |
|
|
|
Reply: 59 - 79 |
|
|