Good read. I like the use of V.O. I like that the script is pretty dark, but I think the baby should be healthy at the end so there's more hope.
It didn't work for me that he didn't notice she had been raped until the next morning; maybe that scene when he discovers should be when he walks in the night before, instead of him being in la la land lol.
I'm not sure everything he says or does has to be God-related. I understand that's the whole point with him, but it'd be clear even if it wasn't constant.
BEANS and ice cream?? lol