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Posted: February 6th, 2020, 6:17pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Unexpected by Zay Rodriguez - Short, Drama - A Latin woman is left abandoned in her relationship. She later goes on and befriends an attractive roommate who she later realizes is not so perfect after all. 34 pages - pdf format

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FADE IN

ON A DOOR OPENING.

Exits ERIC LOPEZ, a young Latin man, no more than twenty
five years old, dragging a luggage bag. A unhappy face.


Zay - we got a problem. You have no scene header. Where are we????

Latino - not Latin.

No more than twenty five years old is pretty inefficient. Just go with ERIC LOPEZ (25).


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Agree with eldave1's comment. And, I got lost in the camera directions. Can you tell us the story without the camera moves? I'm still going to read this through its entirety because I sense something fresh is to be found inside.
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