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Posted: January 20th, 2023, 4:24pm Report to Moderator
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The Muse by Steven Sallie - Short, Horror - A struggling poet sees a ghost in his home and convinces himself that she is his muse. 9 pages - pdf format

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Hey Steven,

I loved this. Thought it was great. Really nicely written and very atmospheric. I was expecting a twist at the end. Or a twist on the twist if that makes sense. Like maybe in that last moment he was to see his muse again. But maybe that would have cheapened it, I don’t know.

Excellent job though.

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Max


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