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Hey now pardner, I may not be one fer the classroom n such like but that there script was not what i was spectin' to read bout my life in the wile west, cos it don't seem to grab me like the sheriff ah that there dustbucket town, and the gripes was funny but it didn't seem to matter none, but I'm sure you'll cum up wi sumpin a little more considered if ya take my meanin'!
Yeah...not a real big fan of this one, I'm afraid. But alot of readers seemed to enjoy the random nature of what was going on in Stormville, so I would encourage the author to give their comments more weight than mine.
I kept waiting for some payoff aside from the unfortunate problems the priest was having, but then the piece ended quite abruptly, with multiple plot points unresolved.
I guess I was hoping for a little more...substance.
Some of the dialogue is kind of funny, and the formatting and spelling are pretty good, suggesting that this is not a first-time author. But then there is all of that pooping and vomiting. I honestly have no idea what to make of this one. I'll be very curious to see who wrote it.
This was a very strange script. It was funny but incoherent. The situations were constantly changing and growing more outrageous. I liked the oddball characters. Ironically, the pig seemed to be the most sane of the bunch. I liked the animal flashback as well. They don't have too many of those in movies. And, of course, what would this script be without the Tanuki reference?
All in all, a good script but try to keep it together next time. A plot would help .
First, I thought this story was about a young Clark Kent coming to terms with his super powers. Then I realized I was thinking about Smallville. Anyway...
I was disappointed when this story ended. It seemed like the writer had a bunch of wacky characters and he threw them in a setting. And then he ended everything. I was impressed with the characters and the author's writing style and would like to see this as a full length story.
Although this script was bizarre it kept me reading -- probably because of length. Seems the character were just thrown together. Need one here -- need one there. Should have thought about each one for five more minutes. For a quick write it went well. It now needs direction, because there was none in this script. I agree, no plot. And a note. If the pig was now dead then the priest should be that much closer to lunch.
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