Hey Diane,


Thanks for taking a look and your feedback!  Hayden is the only one that could see Mr. Karma.   I was trying to portray "karma" in the form of a man.  So I figured he could get away
with some things more than others.  The accident was Hayden's birthday present from Karma.   That's why he waited so long to give Hayden his present.  Karma couldn't intervene until that day.  

Don't worry. It's not you.  Matthew pointed out confusing stuff he read in it.  I'm glad you thought the bully/Hayden exchange was decent.
If you want me to read anything of yours, don't hesitate to ask me.  

All the best!

Quoted from Kevin_L I  most definitely owe you a few.  So don't hesitate to ask me if you think I can be of any help to you.  I did read Mr. Repent.  It was a real good story all around — a true devil of a deal.   I didn't comment on the feedback page because it said in production beside of it.  Can't wait to see it. All the best!

My pleasure.

You don't owe me anything, I've seen you reading and commenting on people's stuff and that's good enough.

Thanks for checking out Mr Repent though, one of my first shorts so the writing is rough as hell lol I haven't bothered rewriting it as I'm going to do a feature based on the character. (The short was supposed to be filmed this year, but the producer has gone quiet and appears to be working on other things, so he has probably scrapped it)

Best of luck to you in your writing

Not too shabby, Kevin. Points for something original.

I'd echo the other comments/questions made so far, so nothing insightful I can add there.

Nice to see something of yours.