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Logline (temporary): A fierce Amazon warrior must choose between loyalty to her queen or joining forces with a group of rebel men to overthrow her tyrannical leader and defeat the god that controls her kingdom.

This is the first thing I ever wrote so I am looking for any feedback whether on the format, dialogues or the content/story. Not sure if this is interesting enough as a cold open? Thanks!

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