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- - I'm Courtney Fisch - - You're watching AMTV! Comedy, drama of 88 pages pdf
Comments and suggestions welcome. In the glitzy chaos of early-2000s London, AMTV showbiz anchor Courtney Fisch and her close-knit crew navigate the highs and hangovers of fame, flings, and finding “the one” — all while trying not to tank their careers.
Hi JtF. I'm reading this over breakfast and won't have time to get much past the first act, if that, but I note a few easily-correctable issues.
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INT. - T.V. GALLERY - DAY
No "-" between INT. and the location. Thus: "INT. T.V. GALLERY - DAY"
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The male ANNOUNCER'S face grins from one of the many TV monitors, as some fingers press illuminated buttons on a vision mixer.
Ultra nitpicky, but a surplus word here, another there... it doesn't seem like many but they add up and soon you add whole extra pages for essentially no real gain.
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COURTNEY 20’s, awaiting her cue.
Missing a comma; one apostrophe too many.
"COURTNEY, 20s,..." or "COURTNEY (20s)..."
Maybe give this another pass to clean up these via your screenwriting software's "find and replace" option.
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- I'm Courtney Fisch - You're watching AMTV! - WIP
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