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Don
Posted: September 23rd, 2018, 8:37pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Get the Italian by John Iannucci - Dramedy - A mob accountant on the run must step up his plan of revenge when the ski resort town he is living in is exposed. 113 pages - pdf format

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Note - this is a complete rewrite of a previous edition
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There's a lot to unpack in this logline, and I had to read it a couple of times to understand it. What are the most important pieces here that sell the heart of the story?

(Note: I personally suck at writing loglines)

I'll try to check the script out soon.
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Funny, I already rewrote the logline as I agree with you.
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This has been updated again
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