Get me the Italian by John Iannucci - Dramedy - Two rival sisters accidentally give out the location of an accountant on the run from the mob and the Feds causing his small town to become a resort meca for hitman and him to step up his plan. 110 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Note - this is a complete rewrite of a previous edition

There's a lot to unpack in this logline, and I had to read it a couple of times to understand it. What are the most important pieces here that sell the heart of the story?

(Note: I personally suck at writing loglines)

I'll try to check the script out soon.

Funny, I already rewrote the logline as I agree with you.