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It's now: A young boy wants to play cars with his mommy. The only problem? He's dead.
Obviously changes nothing in the script. I just like it a little better.
Thanks, Paul
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Good scene work. Felt like it was part of something bigger, though, like there was more to it and this was just a middle section and possibly an ending. Did you write it with that in mind and decide to just "get to the chase" or was this the beginning, middle and end all in one?
Good scene work. Felt like it was part of something bigger, though, like there was more to it and this was just a middle section and possibly an ending. Did you write it with that in mind and decide to just "get to the chase" or was this the beginning, middle and end all in one?
Thanks for taking a read. Yes, I wanted to tell this very specific part of the story. So, the beginning wasn't part of it. Of course, I wanted to give some indication of the how we got here, but I really didn't care to get into the mud of the other aspects of the story.
And, really, I wanted to leave out the end. So, I think you could argue that this is only the middle. Though, I take us as close to the end as possible without actually including it.
PaulKWrites.com
60 Feet Under - Low budget, contained thriller/Feature The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror