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michel
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 8:21am Report to Moderator
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Michel

Not a bad little skit in the vein of Memento...without the tragedy, killing, deceit and self tattoo-ing.

Believe me or not, but I never saw that film. But you make me feel like now.

Anyway, thank you for the reading.

Michel



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Oh yes, make it a priority, its superb.

Like all great films, it requires multiple viewings to really appreciate it.


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Hey Michel, loved this...

What a great and simple idea.  My only minor issue was with that the woman seemed a little to quick to accept the strange mans offer of a rummage in the bed.

I did think to myself that being a member of the AAA looks attractive in this situation but I wonder how long before it becomes a little sore? lol.

Anyway great story, really liked it.


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michel
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the woman seemed a little to quick to accept the strange mans offer of a rummage in the bed.


Alffy, you know how women are...

Only joking Pia, Breanne and Cindy...

I know that point but I couldn't make the conversation any longer. It would have been boring. Anyway, you have to admit that the man's argument is consistent...

Thanks again for the read.

Michel



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Great script When she went to the bathroom, in the end, I kind of saw it starting all over again. I loved the ending.


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michel
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Thanks FDiogo,

I'm glad to realize that my humour is universal... I had fun too writing it.

Michel


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Memento is really an amazing film. You should definitely try and catch it.

I liked this, actually. The transition from 'who are you? What the fuck are you doing in my room?' to 'You smell amazing, baby that feels so good' was perhaps a LITTLE abrupt, but then that doesn't really matter given the overall mood of this piece.

It reminded me, just a little, of this...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1OP4qhuUKo


Guess who's back? Back again?
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Quoted from JonnyBoy
Memento is really an amazing film. You should definitely try and catch it.


I will, JonnyBoy, I will. I've planned to watch this weekend


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michel
Oh yes, make it a priority, its superb.
Like all great films, it requires multiple viewings to really appreciate it.


So, it must be a GREAT film because I was a bit lost on the end.  I'll tell you what after multiple viewings

Michel


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Enjoyed the screenplay, I thought it was short, snappy and very funny! Keep it up!


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Thanks Craig. I had fun while writing it, giggling on my own. Hope someone will shoot it.

My next one won't be as bright as this one.

Michel


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No worries, I look forward to reading it.


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michel
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It'll be a dark and unmoral story with an alternative ending.


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very funny stuff, though i could see there being a little more convincing before they jump into bed again.  maybe some signs of drinking just to lose the inhibitions.
not sure if 'wet dream' properly translates across the cultural divide, I'm sure someone can explain it if not.


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michel
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very funny stuff, though i could see there being a little more convincing before they jump into bed again.  maybe some signs of drinking just to lose the inhibitions.


I'm quite sure the man's explanations are so logical that the woman has to believe him. Imagine yourself in that situation LOL... And, who said women need drinks to to lose their inhibitions? Just take a look at Pia's strories...

Michel


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