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Warren
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 7:26pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Craig Macken
Well, it's done... my votes are in.

For the first time ever, I've put something I've written out there for others to see and criticize...

Arrrrrrrgh!!!! and now it looks like I'm gunna be DQ'd or marked down for violating a rule that wasn't even there when I posted it.

I couldn't care less!!! The challenge here for me was to overcome my fear of embarrassment/humiliation/rejection because my writing isn't up to scratch.

So thank you everyone, for your encouraging comments. I really, really, really appreciate it.


It was a tough first challenge, congrats on getting an entry in.

I'm not sure it ever really gets easier putting your writing out there for others to criticize. It generally goes one of two ways, your skin gets thicker and your writing improves, or (in some cases) you end up leaving the site because it's all too much.

The hanging around and getting better is always the the way to go.

Looking forward to seeing which one is yours.


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LC
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 7:29pm Report to Moderator
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Good on you, Craig!

I had Don pull my first OWC entry. And it wasn't that bad. I just wasn't used to the slings and arrows.

P.S. SS can never have too many Aussies.  
P.P.S And yep, what Warren just said.


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khamanna
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Quoted from Craig Macken
Well, it's done... my votes are in.

For the first time ever, I've put something I've written out there for others to see and criticize...

Arrrrrrrgh!!!! and now it looks like I'm gunna be DQ'd or marked down for violating a rule that wasn't even there when I posted it.

I couldn't care less!!! The challenge here for me was to overcome my fear of embarrassment/humiliation/rejection because my writing isn't up to scratch.

So thank you everyone, for your encouraging comments. I really, really, really appreciate it.


I remember my first entry here wasn't bad. But then it got worse and worse. And then I wrote something chewable. Then again, bad and bad and worse. And ok...

Where am I heading with this? Nowhere.

Congrats on your first) I don't think you will be dq'ed or anything. They don't dq for much more than any of these entry had. Not even for going over the page count which is an easy dq.
And good luck)
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Don
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 8:29pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Quoted from Craig Macken
Well, it's done... my votes are in.

For the first time ever, I've put something I've written out there for others to see and criticize...

Arrrrrrrgh!!!! and now it looks like I'm gunna be DQ'd or marked down for violating a rule that wasn't even there when I posted it.

I couldn't care less!!! The challenge here for me was to overcome my fear of embarrassment/humiliation/rejection because my writing isn't up to scratch.

So thank you everyone, for your encouraging comments. I really, really, really appreciate it.


Craig,

Welcome!  The fact that your script was posted is an indication that it was quite qualified (in my mind).

- Don



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Don
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 8:32pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Claudio


My attempt at a mostly morse code story. I cheated a lot... to make it more understandable and also I'm lazy  

"MORE CODE"

BOAT ON FIRE
---/.../---
(beat)

BOAT ON FIRE
---/.../---
(beat)

BOAT ON FIRE
---/.../---
(beat)

COAST GUARD
---/.../---?

BOAT ON FIRE
---/.../---!!!
(long beat)

COAST GUARD
.../---/…!?
(long beat)

BOAT ON FIRE
.../---/…

COAST GUARD
Well why didn’t you say so.

END


This is hysterical.  My brother, a retired Marine aerial navigator, claimed that every operator had a distinct way of sending Morse code...

- Don


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Don
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 8:34pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Zack

So... When can we start guessing?


Now - https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1618967903/

We're using Australian Rules*



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Don  -  April 20th, 2021, 8:34pm
*There are no "Australian Rules"  I just made that up.
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Don
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 8:36pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from khamanna
I�m still reading. When is the cut off for the voting ballot?
I have about 7 left I think.


Whenever you are done voting, Khamanna.

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Hang on, has everyone voted?  I'll vote now...

Just saw the Aussie Rules thread.


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khamanna
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Voted!
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Warren
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 8:52pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from LC
Hang on, has everyone voted?  I'll vote now...

Just saw the Aussie Rules thread.


Yip.


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LC
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Okay.  I thought reading, reviewing and voting was still going on.

Voted.


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Warren
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 9:27pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from LC
Okay.  I thought reading, reviewing and voting was still going on.

Voted.


It is, but people that have read all and voted can guess


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LC
Posted: April 20th, 2021, 9:39pm Report to Moderator
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Thanks, Warren. Obviously me being a bit dim.
Got me to vote fast.


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Matthew Taylor
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Quoted from Craig Macken
Well, it's done... my votes are in.

For the first time ever, I've put something I've written out there for others to see and criticize...

Arrrrrrrgh!!!! and now it looks like I'm gunna be DQ'd or marked down for violating a rule that wasn't even there when I posted it.

I couldn't care less!!! The challenge here for me was to overcome my fear of embarrassment/humiliation/rejection because my writing isn't up to scratch.

So thank you everyone, for your encouraging comments. I really, really, really appreciate it.


Well done for putting yourself out there - the first time opening yourself up to critique is bloody daunting (My first OWC I thought I wrote pure gold... I was soon brought back down to earth)

And also a thank you for getting stuck in with the reviews, a lot of people entering for the first time don't bother reviewing other entries but challenges like this rely on writers to receive and to give.

Best of luck with your entry


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Craig Macken
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