The efforts paid off...


The writer's choice:

Devil's Due by Paul Knauer - 4


The runner-up:

No Life Without You, Rosanna Dream by Gary T Kohatsu - 3.285


And three ties:

Deja Reve by Kathy Cranford - 3

Is it Warm in Here or is it Just Me? by Michael Godby - 3



The rest are:

Dracul-Stein by Colin Sharp

Bea Witch by Anthony Cawood

The Dead Guy by Kiril Maksimoski

Doe by Ben Clifford

The FBI Agent With Fever Dream by Michael Yu

Congrats, Paul & Gary!
Well deserved.

Congrats to Andrea & Reggie as well with Desert Run, a big favourite as well! I hope to see another draft of it go up.

* Andrea, you got me with the Guess Who Wrote What, by one.
Smarty pants.

A great challenge, Yuvraj.
Even if I didn't get one over the line.

Wow! That was quick! Too Quick.

Congrats PK&Gary - two of our favs.

And congrats to everyone else - job well done.

Quoted Text * Andrea, you got me with the Guess Who Wrote What, by one. Smarty pants.

Haha! 100% correct for me on all guesses. That's gotta be a first.

Didn't read any, but no surprises here

Congrats. You're going to be able to open up a coffee shop with all your mugs soon!

Congrats Paul and Gary!

And everyone else for getting scripts in.

Libby/Andrea - you are definitely witches!

Well done all!

Congrats to Paul and Gary! Another fun and challenging OWC!  I’ve started to liken these to a personal trainer:  They force you to use muscles you rarely use ( or didn’t even know you had).  The workout can be strenuous and taxing, but when completed, you find you’ve made progress toward getting yourself in better shape.  

Also many thanks to everyone who read and commented on  “Deja Reve”, as always, I appreciate all the constructive ideas for improvement shared. I did try to write it more in the tone of a TV medical drama. If I had used the real lingo of the ER, no one could have understood a word and it would have had to be entered as a “Foreign Language” script  

Thanks for the votes everyone. Appreciate it. Didn't know what I had in Devil's Due. Honestly couldn't tell if the story would connect with anyone or not. Glad to see that it did.

Also, congrats to Gary. That script just blew my mind in several places.

My top three were: No Life, Dracul-Stein (still laughing) and Bea Witch, but every script had something to offer, so kudos to everyone who entered.

Congrats, PK and everyone else.  My top two were Devil's Due and Dracul-Stein.  The image of poor Shivers, already debased by wearing that moronic costume, floating, helpless in that pool, is just seared into my brain.  Pure comedy gold.

P.S. - I feel like Mikey felt in the interrogation room while reading the comments about my screenplays during every OWC I take part in...  

Why were my questions and replies disappeared?

Michael

No idea.
PM any further questions, Michael.

Congrats PK!

Well deserved for "Devil's Due", really enjoyed it.

Abe from LA - "No life without You, Rosanna Dream" simply blow me away!

Well done to everybody for entering and for the great feedback.

Well done PK, excellent writing.

I didn't get round to reading them all but overall quality seemed very high!

Congrats to PK for Devil's Due It was hands-down the
best entry. Congratulations also to Kathy, DA-Michael, and Ghost and Ghostie Gal.
My favorites besides DD, were Desert Run and Dracul-Stein.
I thought the dialgoue in Bea Witch was outstanding.
Thanks to everybody who read and commented on my script, and to
all who entered the challenge

Quoted Text LC — I'm curious about the Peter Gun reference.

It was a double entendre: The first being sexual and the second being literal.
Also a nod to the old Craig Stevens' TV cop show, Peter Gunn.

LC, I knew you would guess my entry. You and Andrea are pretty astute.

Well done, Gary!  And thanks for the clarification re Peter Gun.
I found Peter Gunn on the Internet but then that didn't tally with Peter Gun, so tendency to veer into OCD territory averted.

P.S. Andrea beat me by one in the guessing game but I'm gonna get her next time.