PISSER! There's a character named Pisser in this script. Cool. Was this overwritten on purpose?

I liked this one. I think you could have condensed more of the action where Johnny is one-upped and maybe played more on his redemption. I wanted to see some kind of redemption but that fell a little flat. The more Johnny was one-upped the funnier it got. Nice job.

I liked the intro and the Johnny character.

There's one big problem here for me: some scripts deal with a lot of extras, which is fine; but here are like 25 characters jumping in, having lines, appearing, and then disappearing forever. Does not work for me at all, but others seem to love it, so what...

I know I'm not exactly a regular around here, but I figured I'd own up to this one.

Was just a seed of an idea that I sat down and tried to flesh out.  I was gonna do a once over to try and add "laugh out loud" moments, but i thought the "humorous" tone worked.  

thanks to all who liked it.  appreciate it

Nice work... one of my three recommends.

Yeah, great job. I'm going to reread it.

Well done... I really enjoyed this one, came in 2nd in my ratings, and seems to be a lot of people's no. 1. Great work !

thanks guys

Great work mate, also I'll reiterate my compliments on the use of Bonnie Tyler. If there's one thing I never saw coming from this challenge it was the husky voiced Welsh one

Yeah, good job.  How did you like some of the other scripts?

The idea of a world full of "useful" superhero types was a cool one in dead.  It'd be easy to shoot.  Easily one of the best (IMO).

Dan

ps, so what was the life bearer?  You didn't seem to have aliens, so, I didn't get why that was even in the script.

Quoted from DanC Yeah, good job.  How did you like some of the other scripts? The idea of a world full of "useful" superhero types was a cool one in dead.  It'd be easy to shoot.  Easily one of the best (IMO). Dan ps, so what was the life bearer?  You didn't seem to have aliens, so, I didn't get why that was even in the script.

i'd be lying if I said I put a ton of thought into it.  I guess I just wanted to allude to the fact his power derives from the sun Superman style, but he never really has a chance to use it.  "Power Giver" didn't have a good ring to it.  I guess I should have said "power source" or something, b/c "life" is confusing.  ... plus, i was just trying to be cute i guess.

Congratulations and in my top three, a worthy winner.