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"The Plan" The movie. (currently 1540 views)
Tommyp
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:19am
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My script, "The Plan" was made the other day! Very exciting. Here is the youtube link:
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=4pk5j88-dWo There were lots of feedback on the thread with the script,
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1231295404/ ... lots of people had constructive critismto add.
Unfortunately I didn't time to rewrite it, as I got an email from the makers AFTER they had made it. Hmmm. Anyway the video looks good I think. The audio and the acting could be better, but the music and other aspects of it I like.
Anyway what do you guys think? The makers want to make a web series with me.
Helio
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 9:01am
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Tom, I've just saw The Plan. I congratulate you t have a short script done, - better than me, actually.
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Tommyp
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:07pm
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Thanks Helio. Which character did Sam Jenkins play? I don't even know who played who.
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stebrown
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:57pm
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One of them has a really good name haha.
I liked this Tommy. Well done for getting it made.
For two kids with a camera they did pretty well and if they're wanting to work with you that can only be a good thing.
Nice one
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Grandma Bear
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:59pm
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Congrats Tommy!
I thought it was pretty good. The sound was a little uneven and I wished it had been a little less "talking heads", but over all, well done!
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Tommyp
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 7:27pm
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Thanks Ste and Pia. I told them that if we made more it would have to look more professional. That's reasonable I think.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 7:31pm
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Would you like mine?
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Tommyp
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 7:45pm
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Only if it's on a large photo of you posing for a naked (not half naked, I'm talking like fully, off-the-show naked) photoshoot.
Otherwise, na, I'll pass thanks. Wait till you are a bit more famous.
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Shelton
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 8:28pm
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Only if it's on a large photo of you posing for a naked (not half naked, I'm talking like fully, off-the-show naked) photoshoot.
Otherwise, na, I'll pass thanks. Wait till you are a bit more famous.
I have pics like that.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 8:45pm
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I realize you're a pro writer now, but do you really think Tommy wants those pics of you?
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Shelton
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 9:09pm
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I realize you're a pro writer now, but do you really think Tommy wants those pics of you?
Who said they were pics of me? Yowza!
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sniper
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 5:26am
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Down in the hole / Jesus tries to crack a smile / Beneath another shovel load
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Shelton
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 10:00am
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Damn, I'm sexy.
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jayrex
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 1:30pm
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Congrats Tommy,
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Toby_E
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 4:48pm
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Hey man,
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