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"The Plan" The movie. (currently 1543 views) |
Tommyp |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:19am |
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Been Around Continuity Is For Pussies...
LocationAustralia Posts701 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
My script, "The Plan" was made the other day! Very exciting. Here is the youtube link: http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=4pk5j88-dWoThere were lots of feedback on the thread with the script, http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1231295404/ ... lots of people had constructive critismto add. Unfortunately I didn't time to rewrite it, as I got an email from the makers AFTER they had made it. Hmmm. Anyway the video looks good I think. The audio and the acting could be better, but the music and other aspects of it I like. Anyway what do you guys think? The makers want to make a web series with me. |
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Helio |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 9:01am |
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Old Timer Better to die with vodka than with tedium!
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Tom, I've just saw The Plan. I congratulate you t have a short script done, - better than me, actually.
It has a serious sound problem, unfortunatley. I like of Sam Jenkins, I think this guy has future in the acting.
Who directed it? Who is Tom Pascal? |
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Tommyp |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:07pm |
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LocationAustralia Posts701 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Thanks Helio. Which character did Sam Jenkins play? I don't even know who played who.
Sam and Ste, the two actors directed it. I, Tom Pascal wrote it.
Glad you liked it, thanks for the watch. |
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stebrown |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:57pm |
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Been Around
LocationNewcastle, England Posts881 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
Sam and Ste, the two actors directed it. I, Tom Pascal wrote it.
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One of them has a really good name haha. I liked this Tommy. Well done for getting it made. For two kids with a camera they did pretty well and if they're wanting to work with you that can only be a good thing. Nice one Ste |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 6:59pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Congrats Tommy! I thought it was pretty good. The sound was a little uneven and I wished it had been a little less "talking heads", but over all, well done! |
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Tommyp |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 7:27pm |
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LocationAustralia Posts701 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Thanks Ste and Pia. I told them that if we made more it would have to look more professional. That's reasonable I think.
I'm basically a famous writer now. Anyone want an autograph?! |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 7:31pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
T I'm basically a famous writer now. Anyone want an autograph?! |
Would you like mine? |
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Tommyp |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 7:45pm |
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LocationAustralia Posts701 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Only if it's on a large photo of you posing for a naked (not half naked, I'm talking like fully, off-the-show naked) photoshoot. Otherwise, na, I'll pass thanks. Wait till you are a bit more famous. |
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Shelton |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 8:28pm |
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Of The Ancients
LocationChicago Posts3292 Posts Per Day 0.49 |
Only if it's on a large photo of you posing for a naked (not half naked, I'm talking like fully, off-the-show naked) photoshoot. Otherwise, na, I'll pass thanks. Wait till you are a bit more famous. |
I have pics like that. |
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"I think I did pretty well, considering I started out with nothing but a bunch of blank paper." - Steve Martin |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 8:45pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I realize you're a pro writer now, but do you really think Tommy wants those pics of you?
You can send them to me though if you like... |
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Shelton |
Posted: January 26th, 2009, 9:09pm |
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Of The Ancients
LocationChicago Posts3292 Posts Per Day 0.49 |
I realize you're a pro writer now, but do you really think Tommy wants those pics of you?
You can send them to me though if you like... |
Who said they were pics of me? Yowza! |
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sniper |
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 5:26am |
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Old Timer My UZI Weighs A Ton
LocationNorthern Hemisphere Posts2249 Posts Per Day 0.48 |
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Shelton |
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 10:00am |
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Of The Ancients
LocationChicago Posts3292 Posts Per Day 0.49 |
Damn, I'm sexy. |
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jayrex |
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 1:30pm |
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Old Timer Cut to three weeks earlier
LocationLondon, UK Posts1420 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
Congrats Tommy,
Always nice to see other writers here getting their work getting made.
JT. |
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Toby_E |
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 4:48pm |
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Been Around
LocationLondon, UK Posts872 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
Hey man,
As you know, I wasn't a great fan of the script, but for what the film was, it was pretty good man. Acting could have used a bt of work, but yeah, it was pretty good man.
Congrats on getting this made as well.
Take it easy fella'. |
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Tommyp |
Posted: January 27th, 2009, 8:55pm |
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Been Around Continuity Is For Pussies...
LocationAustralia Posts701 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Thanks Jayrex and Toby. We are gonna make a short mini series. I'm writing it now. The film is more of a pilot...
Mike, have you done any acting before? With a body like that, you should seriously look into it. |
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James R |
Posted: January 28th, 2009, 1:45pm |
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New Supper time!
LocationArizona Posts219 Posts Per Day 0.04 |
Congrats, Tom. Is the series going to be web-based so we can all watch it? Warn us if Mike is going to be in it less-than-covered, though. Even with the beard.
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Tommyp |
Posted: January 29th, 2009, 5:13am |
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LocationAustralia Posts701 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Yeah it will be on youtube and similar sites. I will post links as soon as they come out of course Mike will only be naked in about 4 scenes. They are long ones though. Oh this is like a marketing ploy! Everyone watch "The Plan" because Mike is naked in it!!!! |
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James R |
Posted: January 29th, 2009, 1:30pm |
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New Supper time!
LocationArizona Posts219 Posts Per Day 0.04 |
Everyone watch "The Plan" because Mike is naked in it!!!! |
I think that sort of marketing is going to work against you. You maybe should say: Everyone watch in order to NOT see Mike naked. Might get you more hits. |
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