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This one was strange, but it was an odd, interesting take on a drama...Told through animals...Jorge reminds me of a young me (I'd always pull the legs off the Crane Flies or put June Bugs in microwaves) so I had someone to relate to. A shame he got the plague though......
This was interesting, and not badly written either. I guess it meets the challenge, as well.
Unique aspect to this for sure. I guess I kinda like it. Good job. Is it really drama, though? I don't know, but then again, I guess drama is pretty much anyhting and everything.
Man, this was weird. Well-written, but very weird.
When the squirrels first started talking about a revenge plot, I immediately thought of Family Guy, the episode where Meg does her bird calls, and two pigeons get really pissed at her ("I'm gonna go over there" -- "No" -- "I'm gonna go over there and punch her.")
I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.
When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.
MBCgirl =) My finger nails should look nice while I type - Red works!
What can I say, format excellent. Very visual. I didn't believe a boy could just be plain cruel without the parents even having an inkling or the sister not telling on him except when his parents confronted him. Didn't make sence. What were the children's ages?
I really liked this one. Pretty disturbing little kid but a real nice, revenge story with good motivation and believable dialogue. Very imaginative and well written.
I would have liked to know the kids' ages though, that's my one compaint.
Cool story! My only qn is why is Jorge the way he is? Because I didnt know, the end felt a little incomplete. Just a tad. Really, it doesnt matter. Just what I was left thinking. Anyway, Nice!
I liked this one, I was even a little creeped out by how bad Jorge really was. It would have been nice to know the ages of the kids but maybe it's not that important.
This was brilliant, a great idea and a well executed script. I am most impressed. I love the title too, one of the best titles for any script I have ever read at SS.