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Dreamscale
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SUPER - SOME SMALL COASTAL TOWN IN FLORIDA
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You need to work on your dialogue Jeff. Keep it as short as possible!
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Dreamscale
Posted: October 15th, 2012, 10:22pm
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I have issues with exposition and on the Pinocchio dialogue.
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I can't express how much better that makes me feel, Jeff
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Ever had a moment when you threw a pencil and see if it would stick in a celing tile? I'm having such a moment.
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Finished but very dialogue heavy, basically talking heads but I tried my best to avoid it.
Good luck, everyone.
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mcornetto
Posted: October 16th, 2012, 4:32am
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I hope to see that the people who went with a dialogue heavy approach put some extra time into making that dialogue jump off the page. In other words, if you're depending on the dialogue to tell your story then it should be entertaining and character-rich dialogue. At least IMHO.
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Mine, as well, is pretty heavy on the dialogue.
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What?!
I haven’t even got an idea yet… I better get a move on.
very dialogue heavy, basically talking heads but I tried my best to avoid it.
You won’t be alone, I promise you that. It’s going to be very hard to avoid IMO. The scenario needs it, especially as you need to throw in some meaningful backstory. Obviously there are other ways to get this across, but I’m not nearly talented enough to pull it off without dialogue. This is a really good challenge and I emphasize the word challenge.
At least you’ve now got a few days to give it a good look over, Mo.
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First draft done. Would be best described as "Fugly"
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I have two odd but interesting T-rex mimes at a run down circus verbosely discussing the supernatural event that just occurred five minutes before FADE IN that made them blather endless exposition as they watch out the tent flap window SAS paratrooper forces deploy from helicopters to assault the Soviet submarine the hurricane just vomited onto the parking lot.
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