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PKCardinal
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I fear Blondie's not going to be pleased... For the final round, you're all too happy and upbeat and no-one's gnawing their own leg off.  


Worst 5 pages I've written in years. Hands down.

2 hours to fix it. But, I don't think it can be done.

If I didn't feel like I owe it to everybody, I think I'd skip this round.


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Worst 5 pages I've written in years. Hands down.
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Aa empty promises! You’ll end up on top! But let’s see
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Yeah, we've heard that one before, right, Kham?  


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Aa empty promises! You’ll end up on top! But let’s see


I don't think so.

And, this thing (the tourney) is real close. Bad time for me to write a stinker.

I'm trying to salvage it right now. But, I keep distracting myself on here.

I think I'm hoping that the scores will post from last week and I'll be spared. If I don't score well in week 4, then there's no pressure, right?


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Okay. It is what it is. Gonna submit.

No longer dreck, but, it's definitely not the story it could be. We'll see what everyone thinks.

I'll say, today was the most difficult writing day I've had in a long time. So, there you go, Sean. Your plan worked.

I'll tell you how wonderful you are, and how thankful I am, tomorrow. Today is for cursing.


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So far, so good. Some A-game in this final round. Impressive.


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Very sorry, everyone, for my disappearance (although I'm sure you all had a nice reprieve). Due to the heat here, I lost access to my internet, except for when I were at work. I'll try and catch up and I hope this didn't cause any issues for anyone.


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Very sorry, everyone, for my disappearance (although I'm sure you all had a nice reprieve). Due to the heat here, I lost access to my internet, except for when I were at work. I'll try and catch up and I hope this didn't cause any issues for anyone.


We all know that Sean likes to torture us, but scuttling his own Internet Service Provider is taking things to the next level


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Very sorry, everyone, for my disappearance (although I'm sure you all had a nice reprieve). Due to the heat here, I lost access to my internet, except for when I were at work. I'll try and catch up and I hope this didn't cause any issues for anyone.


I had an issue with myself and I got in trouble. It’s hard not to when you’re in trouble with yourself. I mean - who wins that fight
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I’ve read all and submitted my scorings.

No new theme tomorrow.
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Very sorry, everyone, for my disappearance (although I'm sure you all had a nice reprieve). Due to the heat here, I lost ...

I thought when reading this you were going to end that part of the sentence with 'lost my mind'.  



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No new theme tomorrow.


Correct. No new theme tomorrow. Thursday, on the other hand...


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Very sorry, everyone, for my disappearance (although I'm sure you all had a nice reprieve). Due to the heat here, I lost access to my internet, except for when I were at work. I'll try and catch up and I hope this didn't cause any issues for anyone.


No problem. As you can see, we tortured ourselves in your absence.


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Read all and voted. Can't believe it's all over.


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I think we should just carry on... Blondie - set some new criteria and themes!



Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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