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Seven Deadly Sins (currently 7391 views)
Ledbetter
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 4:34pm
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Whew,
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michel
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 4:43pm
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Ledbetter
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 4:49pm
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Are you asking the class or are you not sure?
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Grandma Bear
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 6:08pm
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lol! why did you change your avatar? that's kinda scary
I love that pic! I was zombiefied by SS own Zombie Sean. I think he did a great job!
And I like creepy, bizarre, disgusting, deranged etc etc.
I'm weird I know. And yeah, my kids hated it!
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michel
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 6:22pm
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I'm finally done with the series logline:
"There were the Magnificents Seven, the Seven Dwarves, the Seven Samurais, even the Seven Wonders of the World. And now here come: The scripts will be submitted for the 25th.
Michel
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Grandma Bear
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 7:34pm
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I'm not so sure I like that logline Michel.
I don't really care for the comparison to other movies and besides, the seven deadly sins have been around since about 375 A.D and has had a big impact on especially Christian society throughout history. I think it's of a bit more importance than "the seven dwarfs"...
Maybe that's just me though. I think of those taking part in this, we should be able to come up with something better and more intriguing.
Nothing personal.
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Ledbetter
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 7:46pm
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I like it. It has BUM, BUM, BUM, BUM feel to it. Like an intro to an epic. Kinda feels like something Mel Brooks would use.
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Andrew
Posted: May 21st, 2009, 8:04pm
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Ledbetter and michel,
I have taken the liberty of sending my script to you guys, as you suggested
Sending it over shortly - about 8 pages down and there are a number of comments, which look like this:
These are my notes, about things such as my inciting incident, etc., so please ignore them within the actual script. Anyone else who fancies a read for suggestions would be making me smile
Thanks,
Andrew
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Abe from LA
Posted: May 22nd, 2009, 3:12pm
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Anyone else who fancies a read for suggestions would be making me smile
Thanks,
Andrew
I'll take a look, Andrew. I'm just getting started on my sin (Gluttony) and I could use some inspiration.
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michel
Posted: May 22nd, 2009, 3:26pm
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You go, Jon. Happy B-day.
No time for chit-chat, Abe. You have 15 pages to fill for Sunday and a Sarge to deal with
Michel
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Abe from LA
Posted: May 22nd, 2009, 3:29pm
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Yes sir, Sarge. I mean, Michel.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: May 22nd, 2009, 4:17pm
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I'll send you mine too Andrew.
I need to fix a couple of things before I do, but I'll send it tonight.
Don't forget to send me yours as well.
Anyone else can send me theirs too.
gatortales@gmail.com
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michel
Posted: May 22nd, 2009, 4:42pm
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Pia,
I just sent my second script for Lust.
Michel
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Andrew
Posted: May 22nd, 2009, 6:00pm
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Thanks Pia and Abe.
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michel
Posted: May 24th, 2009, 3:32pm
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Hope everyone will be ready at 11:59 PM...
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