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Colkurtz8
Posted: April 17th, 2018, 9:47am Report to Moderator
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I have mainly dramas with a few comedy/dramas. I will take on any genre.

PM me if interested.

Col.


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Warren
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Hi Col,

I'm happy to read any shorts you want looked at. I dont need anything read in return.

Cheers.


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Colkurtz8
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I will be free all day Wednesday to read a script if anyone is looking for some rambling opinions.

I'm on South Korea time so get on to me prior via PM if interested.

Cheers.


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JEStaats
Posted: June 24th, 2018, 12:47pm Report to Moderator
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Hey Col.,

If the offer is still open, there's a pm waiting for you.

~John
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Colkurtz8
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There is no World Cup for 2 days so besides experiencing withdrawal symptoms I will be able to read and review a script (30 pages or less)

PM me if interested.


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Michal
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Hi ! I am looking for some reviews for my short script  - Hatred is blessing of the end. Anyone want exchange ?

https://www.dropbox.com/s/lxuk.....20THE%20END.pdf?dl=0
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Colkurtz8
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Well, since I instigated a 200+ comments thread about what we should and shouldn't be discussing on here, I kinda have to back that up by offering a script review exchange if anyone is interested.

Note: Discussion of format v story/character will be relative to its importance relative to the script. Dig?


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Matthew Taylor
Posted: April 1st, 2019, 7:09am Report to Moderator
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Hi Col

I'm up for an exchange - I am waiting for a revised version of my last OWC to be put up. Once it's live, I will send you the link if you are up for it. It's 7 pages, Rom-Com.

Regards

Matt


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Colkurtz8
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Mathew

Sure man, send me the link when its up or you can email it to me if you want. Up to you. PM me if you want to do the latter.

I'll post my comments on its discussion board either way.


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Matthew Taylor
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Thanking you.

I've popped it into google drive
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wwpQA9JIT-bYTMcShlLU25vTb3jldLdA/view?usp=sharing

Let me know what you want me to read

Matt


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Hi Matthew,

This is a rewrite of your OWC entry, right?


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Matthew Taylor
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Yup - Finally got round to it. It has changed quite a lot... whether it has improved is yet to be seen lol


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Can't talk about the story, just eyed the first two pages, but it reads and flows better. Well done.


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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Thanking you.

I've popped it into google drive
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wwpQA9JIT-bYTMcShlLU25vTb3jldLdA/view?usp=sharing

Let me know what you want me to read


Cool, I should get around to that later today.

You can check out any of mine linked in my signature. Unfortunately, I only have one script that's of a comparable length to yours.

As noted, follow the dropbox links in some of the older scripts as they will be the newest drafts. You shouldn't but PM me if you have any issues opening them.

Regards

Col.


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Matthew Taylor
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Will do - Might take me a few days, but should have time to read/comment by the end of the week  


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Colkurtz8
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Will do - Might take me a few days, but should have time to read/comment by the end of the week  


No worries. Whenever you get the time.


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Colkurtz8
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Giving this a bump.

Anyone up for an exchange, PM me.


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