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BillyJ
Posted: August 5th, 2020, 8:27am Report to Moderator
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Scapegoat - Guilty

https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-dramedy/m-1596657322/s-new/

Dramedy - A self hating, middle aged attorney will go to any lengths to stop his daughter fromturning out like he did. Yet the only way to save her is to change the way he is, will he learn how to do this before his world falls to pieces? 147 pages

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Hey everyone my script is taking a while to upload because I'm stupid with it but hopefully be up in the next week. I've just completed 2nd script but I was wondering if anyone with dramedies will swap me?

Looking for other dramedies to swap with and will give a full day read and make notes as I go along for you? Looking for people to help me cut my 'scapegoat guilty' script down - will be uploaded soon and also maybe teach me better transitions and how to bullet point this screenplay better - maybe make it more enjoyable to read?

I'll give my fullest attention and will read 1 script a day with as much notes as I can, thankyou very much I'm looking forward to reading.


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Hi BillyJ

Suggestion... Lets wait till after you have posted your script hereto. Giving you the opportunity "re-work" your script according to the good advice / comments we will give thereto.

You can't expect a script exchange read with what you don't have: Title and logline.  

  


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Thanks LC sorry I know Iím like a old man on here haha but anyone need a script review? I can start reviewing today on my breaks be really happy to
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