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RobertSpence
Posted: February 8th, 2021, 10:00pm Report to Moderator
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Hi all

I've just completed the first draft of a feature I've written (around 90 pages) and am looking to have some people look at it to help with my redraft. I'm willing to read scripts in return so get in touch if you'd like to do a swap.

It's a drama and revolves around young offenders, gangs etc.

Thanks

Robert


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Mate-ing

Short Comedy 11 pages

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The Break-Up Chronicles


Short Comedy/Drama 20 pages

[url]https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/TheBreak-UpChroniclesbyRo

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It moves quickly,simply. I would say it's good fare to develop the characters more and the story can move along with some twist, more of them.

Also, what kind of personalities do these guys have?  Are you going to develop them into some more dynamism?
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FrankH
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Hey Robert,

I'm interested in a swap.
Message or e-mail me.

Frank


FEATURES:
Strength of a Soul (Thriller/Supernatural)
Inconceivable Pain (Thriller)

SHORT COMEDY:
Heads or Tails
Happy Birthday
Size Doesn't Matter

SHORT DRAMA:
Imaginary Friend
Sleepwalking

SHORT THRILLER:
Unbreakable Bond
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Robert,

Happy to review and swap.

How do I see yours?

Cheers

Jason
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