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Hey all, I have a 19 page script adapted from an unfinished short story I wrote.  If anyone is willing to read it, I'd be happy to read someone else's script in return.  I'm willing to read a script of any genre or length, but if it's more than 90 pages it might take me a while to get back to you with review.

This is my very first stab at writing a screenplay so I'm happy for any basic advice about what works, what doesn't work, etc.

Title: Lords and Ladies

Genre: Black Comedy / Crime

Length: 19 pages

Logline: A pair of semi-competent bank employees get embroiled in small-town mafia shenanigans in this black comedic crime short.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Q2IITr95PrJNJaOqDjEhpbqWXBiIXBZk/view
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