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elis
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 12:25am Report to Moderator
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Hi Electricsatori,

Welcome!
I've been on here six weeks and it is addictive.

Will look forward to reading some of your feature scripts.
I am not much of a short story reader.
Cheers,
Elis


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SwapJack
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Quoted from electricsatori


I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.



good. we need more people like you on this site. instead of the mercs who make nebulous comments in hopes for reads.

review my scripts anytime.


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electricsatori
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Right on Swapjack, I'll be happy to critique anything you got bud.
Ooh, I see you have links to your work. I just finished a monster critique for Zack but I will check yours out next.

Which one do you want a crit on?


DUST AND ROSES - (Western) 7 Pages

SUNDAY IS THE WORST DAY TO DIE OF THE PLAGUE - (Drama) 12 Pages

THE GHOST OF JOHN (Horror) 94 Pages
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Gaara
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You're also welcome to review my scripts anytime you feel like...and also feel free to be brutally honest about anything and everything.


check out episodes 1 - 3 of Mister D.
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electricsatori
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You got it pumpkinhead. Give me a script you are serious about and I'll do it.


DUST AND ROSES - (Western) 7 Pages

SUNDAY IS THE WORST DAY TO DIE OF THE PLAGUE - (Drama) 12 Pages

THE GHOST OF JOHN (Horror) 94 Pages
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Gaara
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okay.  Your choice you can either do this short

Stalkers.

There are 2 scripts in this one, the first is Zacks and the second "Unseen" is mine.


or you can do this one (feature length)

Jason versus Pumpkinhead

For this one I am aware of a few errors that I need to fix but anything else you might notice that have skipped mine (and other peoples attention) would be appreciated.

But as I said it is your choice which one you do.



check out episodes 1 - 3 of Mister D.
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electricsatori
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Zack asked me to do Stalkers and I critiqued his first half. That's great that you guys teamed up for this!
Since I've already done Zack's half of Stalkers I will do yours next.

I need to finish the second act of a script I'm working on right now (Easter Summer). I have to finish the 2nd act before it goes stale in my head.
If you check out the Stalkers' thread you will see my critique on his half. I will give yours the same attention to detail.


DUST AND ROSES - (Western) 7 Pages

SUNDAY IS THE WORST DAY TO DIE OF THE PLAGUE - (Drama) 12 Pages

THE GHOST OF JOHN (Horror) 94 Pages
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Gaara
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Don't worry about it, you can do it in your own time, it's not like it's going anywhere

Finish up what you need to do and then you can review mine


check out episodes 1 - 3 of Mister D.
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