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elis
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 12:25am
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Hi Electricsatori, Welcome! I've been on here six weeks and it is addictive. Will look forward to reading some of your feature scripts. I am not much of a short story reader. Cheers, Elis
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SwapJack
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 12:33am
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I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.
good. we need more people like you on this site. instead of the mercs who make nebulous comments in hopes for reads.
review my scripts anytime.
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electricsatori
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 12:43pm
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Right on Swapjack, I'll be happy to critique anything you got bud. Ooh, I see you have links to your work. I just finished a monster critique for Zack but I will check yours out next. Which one do you want a crit on?
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Gaara
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 1:09pm
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You're also welcome to review my scripts anytime you feel like...and also feel free to be brutally honest about anything and everything.
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electricsatori
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 1:18pm
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You got it pumpkinhead. Give me a script you are serious about and I'll do it.
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Gaara
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 1:24pm
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okay. Your choice you can either do this short
Stalkers .
There are 2 scripts in this one, the first is Zacks and the second "Unseen" is mine.
or you can do this one (feature length)
Jason versus Pumpkinhead For this one I am aware of a few errors that I need to fix but anything else you might notice that have skipped mine (and other peoples attention) would be appreciated.
But as I said it is your choice which one you do.
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electricsatori
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 1:41pm
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Zack asked me to do Stalkers and I critiqued his first half. That's great that you guys teamed up for this! Since I've already done Zack's half of Stalkers I will do yours next. I need to finish the second act of a script I'm working on right now (Easter Summer). I have to finish the 2nd act before it goes stale in my head. If you check out the Stalkers' thread you will see my critique on his half. I will give yours the same attention to detail.
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Gaara
Posted: June 8th, 2007, 1:45pm
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Don't worry about it, you can do it in your own time, it's not like it's going anywhere
Finish up what you need to do and then you can review mine
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